OK, np, I will hold up a bit then.
Annie, it seems that Annie can seemingly kill multiple werewolves in an instant without breaking a sweat, literally. I view this as more overpowering than Amelia's shadowmagic affecting a majority of combatants, as Annie, despite being a child, is more powerful than the two armies. If you have read the main parts of the battle, fighting the beasts takes time, effort, blood, sweat and energy, whereas Annie just runs around killing anything and everything in her way effortlessly and immediately. There should be a portrayed struggle between the two forces, otherwise, it feels like anime. It seems that every werewolf in Annie's path does absolutely nothing to defend themselves, what are they doing, staring at the birds? Enemy forces should be portrayed with as much activity as your own character about half the time.
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