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Inferi

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Oh, Azi, Amelia is going to give Ironwolf shadow armor, so if she is going to get hurt just hold off on it for me, will you?

I'm also working on something for Dept 37, but that might take me a bit longer.
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31-Mar-2016 02:28:19 - Last edited on 31-Mar-2016 03:36:14 by Inferi

Azigarath

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OK, np, I will hold up a bit then.

Annie, it seems that Annie can seemingly kill multiple werewolves in an instant without breaking a sweat, literally. I view this as more overpowering than Amelia's shadowmagic affecting a majority of combatants, as Annie, despite being a child, is more powerful than the two armies. If you have read the main parts of the battle, fighting the beasts takes time, effort, blood, sweat and energy, whereas Annie just runs around killing anything and everything in her way effortlessly and immediately. There should be a portrayed struggle between the two forces, otherwise, it feels like anime. It seems that every werewolf in Annie's path does absolutely nothing to defend themselves, what are they doing, staring at the birds? Enemy forces should be portrayed with as much activity as your own character about half the time.

31-Mar-2016 03:35:32 - Last edited on 31-Mar-2016 03:42:58 by Azigarath

Inferi

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So, a few things about that post. 1) I think I covered everything, but if there's a glaring flaw in something I said please let me know. I just really wanted to get that up before I went to bed tonight.

2) I am pretty sure I'm correct in saying that Annie is running along the walls, but if I'm not tell me.

3) I'm sorry to throw this into some form of PvP, but if Annie is making a flashy entrance like that there's no way it won't be noticed by someone who is watching the entire battle.
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31-Mar-2016 03:36:19

Azigarath

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1 Everything seems good!

2 Yes, Annie is running along the walls fighting the beasts who seemingly do nothing to protect themselves.

3 The PvP seems like a great idea and is understandable, though Atatos is the greatest threat I think. But Annie's immense sorcery is definitely noticeable.

Atatos has also leaned over the western wall and his inner skeleton is visibly forming pyromancy and Frozen Fire.

Anyways, I'm done for tonight as well, be back tomorrow after my second meeting with my mill's officials regarding my current situation.

31-Mar-2016 03:49:20 - Last edited on 31-Mar-2016 03:50:02 by Azigarath

Westenev

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Corbo seems to have gone guns akimbo in the atrium (something we probably can't ignore, even while on the second floor).

Do the terrorists notice this, or do we continue business as normal? Hell, at this rate we might as well just take them on through hand-to-hand combat... they certainly seem weak. And considering we have gunfire going off all over the mall, it'd be weird that nobody had noticed yet.
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31-Mar-2016 11:07:39 - Last edited on 31-Mar-2016 11:09:08 by Westenev

Inferi

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Yeah, there's a lot more chaos going on right now than I would have anticipated. It seemed to me that a little subterfuge was needed, and it seemed to start that way, but now we've got multiple groups opening fire.

Annie1227 said :
Azi, do I need to change my post?


I think a better solution is for you to learn from what people are telling you, and don't just repeat the same cycle.

Also, on a more relevant note, I'd say not to bother since someone (me) has already responded to what Annie did, so changing it would invalidate posts that are reliant on it. Don't change it, but just keep in mind what's already been told to you about what you were doing.
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31-Mar-2016 12:09:04 - Last edited on 31-Mar-2016 12:11:20 by Inferi

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