Don't worry about it, Twink, I don't mind what you're doing, and I don't consider your RP toxic. I don't think Annie minds your attributions, either, I think she likes it when the theadmaster takes control of background content her bios allude. It's your thread, too, you're allowed to do whatever you want, I won't get upset with what you want to do.
My only semi-criticism is you tend to remain expository with your RP's praxis, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, but I prefer action-based storytelling over description-based protocols. It's your call, tho, you don't have to change it, and indeed most novels do just that, but I gotta try to be useful and say something that might be worthwhile.
If you'd like to see an example of action-based storytelling, you can read the first chapter of Skyhook, a story of mine on Wattpad, which shouldn't be difficult to find, but you don't have to. Just go over into Wattpad and look-up Skyhook, chances are it's the only story called that on the internet, but the author will be JonathanKonopka, and the picture is a logo of a wyvern over a blue oval, you really can't miss it.
Basically, sometimes, good storytelling isn't about what you're saying, it's about what little you do to get the point across.
Oh, and I hope you had a good birthday! I remain inactive due to the heat dome affecting British Columbia, I can't really think when it's this hot, so I remain in my toasty hiatus for a while longer.
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Azi Demonica
