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Annie1227 said :
-I love to rock and roll-

Lol. There is a description of Zurga but it is super vague. I'm going to refine it a bit later.

A lot of instances of punctuation errors, sometimes I even used the wrong words to describe actions with the environment. I occasionally used the wrong spelling of a word. That one post I have for Tingus was so badly written that looking at it confused the fuck out of me XD I Type way too fast, it seems.

Lots of instances of me making assumptions of what may be going through your characters heads. I'm not sure if a threadmaster should be doing this. Or maybe I've been told but forgot. XD

If this is not Kosher, I apologize, and will make a huge effort not to do that in future rps. =) Just your friendly neighborhood gay boy! =)

03-Feb-2021 19:24:56 - Last edited on 03-Feb-2021 19:35:00 by Pink 4 Twink

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There we go, relatively simple edits, though I had to cut out a lot of the cheesy dialogue such as Haegar's lusty comments about Vyras, Antonius' "Notice me, Senpai," lines, and Zurga's lust for Antonius, on page 4. Lmao

They really did not belong in the story, and were just weird. I'm going to do the same for any other lines like that I find as I go through the rp again, but for now I'm going to get a few posts up for you and Azi. =D Just your friendly neighborhood gay boy! =)

03-Feb-2021 23:25:28 - Last edited on 03-Feb-2021 23:27:57 by Pink 4 Twink

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Hm, activity plummeted again, but we still have some going on in Vampyro.
I PMed Atarashi to see if he's OK, hopefully he posts soon.

In the meantime, if anyone's still out there, I was watching scenes from various cult classics such as Hellraiser, The Keep, The Thing, The Evil Dead, Pumpkinhead, etc. They gave me the idea that a story seems to be driven by the villain/evil force, of which the survivors scramble about trying to figure out how to deal with it. This also made me think that role-players need to have stronger roles, or incorporate a player's character into a powerful role via some sort of amalgamation.

I also think these events should happen faster, so rather than building tension and subtly, we approach the climax within several pages or so. I think it'd also be cool if players' actions could decide how the story's events unfold amidst several immensely powerful NPCs' backstories/user-influenced NPCs/characters to reform the world around them as we approach the climax.

Overall, this system would work with really anything, but I was thinking of a dark but basic role-play something within dieselpunk/historic fiction/fantasy and--as usual--the capability for users to be whatever they feel like, but maybe with certain abilities attracting certain entities or being the cause of looming doom.

I don't know if this idea would work but might as well throw out a simple concept first and see what goes.

12-Feb-2021 03:49:48

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