Alright, I got two bios up for George's RP. I hope they work and fit despite some struggle. Took me about an hour to finish them -.- normally, it would take me like twenty minutes, but my mind clearly isn't working as good as it used to.
George Rozas
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A serial killer is very much out of the question.
What would you think about a boy, possibly around 14-16, who had a very rough childhood (one where child protection had to pull him into a foster home). The boy was polite and smiled a lot, but had a lecherous side towards women that was (at the time) played off as little more than a childhood prank.
As the boy grew older, he began to meet other children. He quickly found out he was the exception, that none had a past like he did. This fact infuriated him. He could only conclude that such unfairness was the world's doing, and so he was entitled to take some measure of happiness from others.
The polite, smiling boy then fractured, developing a twisted side where he would fight people with the smallest provocation and force himself onto girls. Obviously such behaviours lead to the boy being expelled from several schools, and he moved foster homes frequently. Such discord did nothing to change his behaviour, which landed him into detention today.
Basically this character would attempt to establish dominancy over every other character and situation through brute force, under the pretence that the world owes him. Although he can act charming and sweet, his short-fused rage can flip at any time to make him do the unthinkable.
Would this character be acceptable?
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28-Jan-2019 01:20:48
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28-Jan-2019 01:23:42
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Westenev
I do want to raise a point though, how many characters on this forum have off-putting traits, thoughts or tendancies that are a tad worse than "mildly annoying"?
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28-Jan-2019 01:41:50
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28-Jan-2019 01:42:28
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George Rozas
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I'm gonna tentatively accept them, Azi.
If you have a lack of confidence, I can rework the bios into something else.
I just wanted to have backstories relatable to their image. Zenon looks like a hooligan-nerd in the Imgur image, and Claudette is based off of Claudette from Dead by Daylight. Since you mention bios don't have to be ultra-realistic, I figured that meant I could be a bit liberal in things, so I used people who were extraordinary.
I wanted to have characters who were both relevant and useful in the RP and the context its headed for, but also have characters who stood out and were memorable. A character that's easy to remember is easier to use, after all.
OK, I removed Zenon's hacking into online banking details, that should keep things more balanced.
28-Jan-2019 01:48:04
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28-Jan-2019 02:07:45
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Azi Demonica