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Yeah, how exactly is she so good with everything at such a young age? Even the older people don't seem to be nearly as good with as many things as her.

Also, what barbarians? Those don't really exist here.

Oh, and knights aren't exactly that much of a thing. Sure, they exist, but in an era where it's transitioning into the modern world, a knight wouldn't be the fantasy thing that I think you're imagining.

EDIT: Request denied, West.
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22-Aug-2018 03:54:14 - Last edited on 22-Aug-2018 03:54:40 by Inferi

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Annie1227 said :
Better?


I've still got some issues. The main one here is that you seem to be envisioning this as a medieval world.

It's not.

Also, Annie knows how to do too much. She's 14. That's not really enough time to actually know how to do multiple styles of combat. The basics, maybe, but in a mostly modern world it really doesn't make a lot of sense for someone to teach their kid how to use every weapon there is from the time that they first started walking.

She also has too many weapons. Nobody of that age, unless there's extremely special circumstances, is going to travel with that many weapons, and supplies, and whatever the hell else they have. Besides, she won't know how to use them all that well.
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22-Aug-2018 19:38:30

Inferi

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The armor is a bit archaic. Like I said, you have it set for a medieval setting, which this is not. I know you like to copy/paste everything, but you really should read it before you post it.

Apart from that, I suppose it can be fine, but don't expect me to start making bandits come after her. If that's what you were hoping for, I am not going to be doing it.

As a note that everyone makes but you never seem to listen to, she is not going to be as effective with combat as most other people. She's too young to have her body develop to a point where she'd be able to stand effectively against any older and bigger person of the same skill level. I just want you to be aware of this.
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22-Aug-2018 19:59:56

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