Annie1227
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Ok. Just so you know I change one of my weapons for my character. I took out the bow and arrows and put a pistol instead
Ah, you did, for both posts. Definitely an improvement on lethality.
20-Aug-2018 06:03:03
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20-Aug-2018 06:03:25
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Azi Demonica
It's not the greatest post, but I've been mulling this over all day and figured this is the only realistic way a plan like this would work. Six men charging into a building wouldn't get anyone anywhere, and you couldn't just commit an act of terror lest you risk losing everything - you'd need a mole of some kind to capture every objective.
I also butchered the characterisation of Lachlan and the NPC's (I think one of them doesn't even have a line) - I've never been particuarly great at short stories, and truth be told, I didn't really put a hell of a lot of thought into it. In case that wasn't obvious.
I guess I'd better start looking at the other thread, which in hindsight, might have been a better warm up.
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20-Aug-2018 11:59:44
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20-Aug-2018 12:52:18
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Your two posts are fine, West, regarding Extermination. So, I take it Mario B is the sixth member? Or, is the sixth member a secret agent or something Lachlan knows about?
I think overall your intro is really cool, actually, you put much more content than I expected. Just waiting for NotFishing, then we can get the party started. Should be great!
20-Aug-2018 19:52:10
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20-Aug-2018 20:25:20
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Azi Demonica
Hey Fish, since you asked a question about my thread, should I be expecting anything from you on it? I've got no issue with
being lazy about posting
waiting for a bit, I'd just like to make sure.
Also, West, just want to make sure that you're aware it's evening, not morning. Wasn't sure if that was what you were trying to say in your post.
Done in by the dubious doings of destiny.
20-Aug-2018 22:23:13
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20-Aug-2018 23:06:34
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Inferi
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Also, West, just want to make sure that you're aware it's evening, not morning. Wasn't sure if that was what you were trying to say in your post.
I'm aware. Just chalk it down to me wanting to go to bed, and cutting every important detail out in the process.
Azi Demonica
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Your two posts are fine, West, regarding Extermination. So, I take it Mario B is the sixth member? Or, is the sixth member a secret agent or something Lachlan knows about?
Aren't sixth members always traitors?
Crap, I didn't think this through.
In all seriousness, I must have added another guy in my headcannon. I guess "Lonny" is still hanging about the backstage.
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21-Aug-2018 00:02:37
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21-Aug-2018 00:14:22
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Westenev
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Inferi
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Also, West, just want to make sure that you're aware it's evening, not morning. Wasn't sure if that was what you were trying to say in your post.
I'm aware. Just chalk it down to me wanting to go to bed, and cutting every important detail out in the process.