Scuddlegirl, if you read this, I have a few concerns about your bio:
-You are vague on her age and her race. Why is that?
-"Has a generally positive relationship with most goblins." Could you elaborate further?
-The bio doesn't actually mention her being part of the Stronghammer Company.
Anyways, you seem to be new here, so welcome to the community.
Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.
A lot of things were made vague on purpose, although the age is that way because I don't know if the races mature at different rates. I think it's more fun to meet characters when you don't know every last detail about them! For the last point, I thought everyone was a part of the company by default since that's the whole point.
Sorry for the trouble! I can specify more if it's absolutely necessary.
A lot of things were made vague on purpose, although the age is that way because I don't know if the races mature at different rates. I think it's more fun to meet characters when you don't know every last detail about them! For the last point, I thought everyone was a part of the company by default since that's the whole point.
Sorry for the trouble! I can specify more if it's absolutely necessary.
Okay, I guess if you want this to be some hidden detail to reveal later, that's fine... just don't have her turn out to be some sort of demi-god or something.
And yes, that is the point, I was just somewhat confused because your bio didn't list them under factions.
Now, back to the goblin thing: that's the one thing I really need to know what you mean, since much of the RP is going to take place in that region. When you say most goblins, do you mean she is good at making friends with most goblins? Because I don't see how it would be possible for her to be on good terms with most of Echion's goblin population. Or do you mean she knows a lot of Goblin tribes and has managed to befriend them?
Aside from those minor concerns, the bio is good, and I'll accept it once you clarify the goblin relation (I also hope the whole hammer thing will get explained at some point as well.)
Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.
Honestly, it's really hard trying to think of what an introverted Spartan and a short-tempered Brute could do to motivate an entire room full of soldiers.
Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.