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NotFishing

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The Prince actually wanted your character dead. That's why he disapproved of the King's decision.

As for the King, he can't look weak in front of his people, and he can't just let someone who tried to infiltrate his city leave without any consequences.
Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.

18-Mar-2017 19:42:40 - Last edited on 18-Mar-2017 19:44:08 by NotFishing

Azi Demonica

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George Rozas said :
Now I just have to spend a while figuring out who cracked open his tomb, why they did so, and where in the seven hells his tomb is in the first place...

I think I had been expecting a prologue/awakening that provided whoever cracked the tomb open rather than just a dream I can make nearly no sense of. Might just be what I gathered from the other prologues, though...

Oh, I didn't expect you expected me to intro Gideon so far as to reveal who released him. I thought you had something already planned, and did not want to interfere with it.

Anyways, if you are having a problem, I can go ahead and intro Gideon for you, if you'd like. What I first had in mind yesterday, was that a descendant of someone who Gideon killed, after finding out where his grave is, sought to destroy it, to erase Gideon from history. Alternatively, I can get a character seeking out the Scions to have sensed him and so went after him, or whatever else you'd like.

18-Mar-2017 19:42:48

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Annie1227 said :
True

They could have whipped her.


Whoa whoa whoa

WHOA

Why?

That would just be cruelty for cruelty's sake, and it would have only been temporary. The brand is permanent, and prevents her from coming back to commit the same crime.
Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.

18-Mar-2017 20:00:16

George Rozas

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Azi Demonica said :
George Rozas said :
Now I just have to spend a while figuring out who cracked open his tomb, why they did so, and where in the seven hells his tomb is in the first place...

I think I had been expecting a prologue/awakening that provided whoever cracked the tomb open rather than just a dream I can make nearly no sense of. Might just be what I gathered from the other prologues, though...

Oh, I didn't expect you expected me to intro Gideon so far as to reveal who released him. I thought you had something already planned, and did not want to interfere with it.

Anyways, if you are having a problem, I can go ahead and intro Gideon for you, if you'd like. What I first had in mind yesterday, was that a descendant of someone who Gideon killed, after finding out where his grave is, sought to destroy it, to erase Gideon from history. Alternatively, I can get a character seeking out the Scions to have sensed him and so went after him, or whatever else you'd like.

Didn't really have a plan, no. I would've come up with one had I not figured you were deciding where we started/the scenario, but I've got nothing right now. I just knew I wanted his beginning to be him getting out of his tomb.

It could certainly be someone who is seeking his tomb out specifically for some reason or another, or it could be a completely incidental thing, like grave robbers breaking into an old tomb that has no name on it. I don't mind really, I'll be happy with most anything.
I am Inferi.

18-Mar-2017 20:20:20

Azi Demonica

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Annie, how does Annie's sleeve 'go up' during the branding? It's like it rolls up on its own. As for being branched on the back of the right hand, wouldn't that destroy the veins and eventually, lack of blood flow would cause the hand to just fall off?

Anyways, I am surprised that this scene went as far as it did, I don't think I'd be cruel enough to write it out. The worst I did to Annie Wells was to depict a bunch of slavers from the desert try to rape her in ADW, but of course she just uses her magic to burn them all to death, and then she just moves on as if nothing happened like a child badass.

I am working on my next posts in TFL, but I don't know if I am meant to depict the next duel or not.

Edit: OK George, I will try to intro Gideon soon, and OK, np Fishing, if you'd like to change character stories a bit, I will wait.

18-Mar-2017 20:25:53 - Last edited on 18-Mar-2017 20:27:53 by Azi Demonica

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