Annie, how does Annie's sleeve 'go up' during the branding? It's like it rolls up on its own. As for being branched on the back of the right hand, wouldn't that destroy the veins and eventually, lack of blood flow would cause the hand to just fall off?
Anyways, I am surprised that this scene went as far as it did, I don't think I'd be cruel enough to write it out. The worst I did to Annie Wells was to depict a bunch of slavers from the desert try to rape her in ADW, but of course she just uses her magic to burn them all to death, and then she just moves on as if nothing happened like a child badass.
I am working on my next posts in TFL, but I don't know if I am meant to depict the next duel or not.
Edit: OK George, I will try to intro Gideon soon, and OK, np Fishing, if you'd like to change character stories a bit, I will wait.
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