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Inferi

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George Rozas said :
NotFishing said :
OUTSIDER'S HAIRY ARSE

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Gary ran after Alisha


I mean, I hate to be that technicality guy, but he didn't. Gary's trying to put as much distance between himself and literally everyone else as possible.

Of all the possible things you find wrong with that post.

THAT is your complaint.


He's just ignoring everything except the part that involves him.
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20-Jan-2017 02:47:57

NotFishing

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Annie repiled with tears coming down her face, barly able to answer,"Mmmy ppparreents and Iiii wwwhere ggggoing to tttttraadde wwwith aaannnotther ttttribe bbbbuuuttt wwee ggot aaaatttack ooonn ttthee wwway ttthere. Mmyy ppparents told mmee to hid and iii did. Thhe aattakers kkkillled my ppparents. Iii wwwwatch myyy ppparents dddiee fffrroom mmy hhhidding sssspot." She cried even harder now.


Annie, you don't need to draw out every word like that to convey sadness. It's making your post extremely difficult to read, and just makes it sound like she is speaking in slow motion.

What I would suggest is to use normal spelling, but simply add in some stuttering. Instead of "Mmmy ppparreents", just write "My p-parents" (the - key is right next to the 0 key.)

But don't overuse that either, just use it once or twice every sentence.
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20-Jan-2017 02:48:28

NotFishing

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Inferi said :
George Rozas said :
NotFishing said :
OUTSIDER'S HAIRY ARSE

Also...

Original message details are unavailable.
Gary ran after Alisha


I mean, I hate to be that technicality guy, but he didn't. Gary's trying to put as much distance between himself and literally everyone else as possible.

Of all the possible things you find wrong with that post.

THAT is your complaint.


He's just ignoring everything except the part that involves him.


No no no, the "OUTSIDER'S HAIRY ARSE!" was directed at the bit with the wolves.

My correction was just a minor nitpick towards the part that happened to involve me, because I figured you guys would tackle the rest.

But, since we're on the subject.

Azi, nowhere in your bio does it mention talking, rolling wolves. It just said you can communicate with and control animals, not make those animals do things that animals can't normally do.
Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.

20-Jan-2017 02:51:58

Inferi

Inferi

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NotFishing said :
Inferi said :
George Rozas said :
NotFishing said :
OUTSIDER'S HAIRY ARSE

Also...

Original message details are unavailable.
Gary ran after Alisha


I mean, I hate to be that technicality guy, but he didn't. Gary's trying to put as much distance between himself and literally everyone else as possible.

Of all the possible things you find wrong with that post.

THAT is your complaint.


He's just ignoring everything except the part that involves him.


No no no, the "OUTSIDER'S HAIRY ARSE!" was directed at the bit with the wolves.

My correction was just a minor nitpick towards the part that happened to involve me, because I figured you guys would tackle the rest.

But, since we're on the subject.

Azi, nowhere in your bio does it mention talking, rolling wolves. It just said you can communicate with and control animals, not make those animals do things that animals can't normally do.


Yeah. You go.

I literally just...can't.
Done in by the dubious doings of destiny.

20-Jan-2017 02:52:56

NotFishing

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George Rozas said :
Or make wolves grow to twice their usual size.


I thought that was covered under "things animals can't normally do."

Thing is, according to Azi she's not even at full power yet.
Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.

20-Jan-2017 02:53:37 - Last edited on 20-Jan-2017 02:54:26 by NotFishing

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