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NotFishing

NotFishing

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Azi, is your post on Fallen Light not finished yet? It sort of cuts off with an "and then...", implying something is going to happen.

Also, it's your post on Koray.

I also have a question about your thread. You say Gary can either shoot or grab onto something, but you haven't actually described anything he could grab. Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.

20-Jan-2017 00:55:03

Azi Demonica

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My post in Fallen Light is finished, I am awaiting your response.

I will post in Koray for both groups. I will force Group A to stop fleeing, and protect the children.

Gary can grab anything you describe, such as the piping at either side of the entrance, things inside the lab like a desk, or just shoot into the mysterious, occult condensation. I am trying to evoke a sense of tension by leaving an absence of details of the threat.

20-Jan-2017 01:20:42 - Last edited on 20-Jan-2017 01:20:56 by Azi Demonica

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