I don't care, it was still awesome even if it was at my expense.
Anyways...
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Annie been following the group for a very long time. She been very lucky she hasn't been caught yet. She walked silently threw the bushes in the shadows. She held in one hand a pad and pen. On her hip she has her her sword and on her back near her pack held her bow and arrows. She snook into the town by using the bushes as cover. She wrote about the town like in description,the people and so much more in her notebook. She stopped behind a bush that was close to the castle as the group went into the castle. She was watching the people at the castle and writing the information in her notebook. she crawled and silently behind a closer bush near the castle. Closer to them this time and quietly continued to watch and continue writing in her notebook.
1. I feel like Joric would have had his men specifically keep watch for spies and scouts and whatnot, considering who he was escorting.
2. There aren't any bushes. It's an open field leading up to the gate. Which makes your ability to follow him all that way even more sketchy.
3. You can't sneak into town. It's walled, there are sentries keeping watch, and the gate is the only entrance.
4. It's not a castle, it's a house. I don't even think I described any bushes in front of it.
5. What is she writing with? Is she just carrying a quill and an inkwell with her? A piece of charcoal? Where did she get the paper? More specifically, where did she get a book?
6. Why is she even following them to begin with? They're a small band of armed soldiers who happen to have a civilian tagging along, who at first glance doesn't seem to be of any particular importance.
Beneath the gold, the Bitter Steel.
18-Jan-2017 02:06:00
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