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26-Apr-2007 17:14:38

Elitemage14

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"Just hand me the tweezers, then," he replied as he stood up and went over to the youth group's refrigerator. "I'll just need some vodka or something so this doesn't get infected."
"This is a church! There won't be any vodka here."
"Doesn't matter. Teens are still teens." After removing the false backing to the fridge he found exactly what he was looking for: a stash of alcohol, along with some other less than legal items. John grabbed a container of vodka, and then took a bottle of whipped cream and set them both on the table. There was also flat topped stove in the room, and he turned it up to full blast. Taking a kitchen knife, he gently set the flat of the blade on the stove top and let it heat up.
"Oh no, don't even think about it!" Sarah yelled, now realizing what John intended to do.
"I use to be in the Boy Scouts. I know what I'm doing." He sat down, and then took off his belt, folded it over once, and stuck it into his mouth as he took the tweezers to his bullet wound. He bit down and screamed into the leather as he poked around inside the wound. The pain was nearly unbearably as the tweezers clamped down and pulled out the crushed fragment of a bullet, but it faded quickly once it was out of his body. Next came the vodka, which he poured into the open wound. Although he didn't need the belt for this part, it still stung horribly as he cleaned out the wound.
Satisfied that any possible infection had been killed off, John went to check on the kitchen knife. The blade was now white hot.

26-Apr-2007 21:18:43 - Last edited on 21-Mar-2010 00:38:25 by Elitemage14

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"Sarah, I'm going to need your help for the next part."
"No. Please don't make me do this. I can't do it. I just can't."
"Sarah, I need your help for this part. I won't be able to get both the enter and exit wound by myself. Please, I need you to do this for me," he said, handing her the glowing knife.
She took the handle silently, looking as if she was about to vomit.
"Good luck," John told her as he sat down. He raised the bottle of whipped cream up to his mouth and sucked down on the nozzle. Pure oxygen rushed through his lungs and up to his brain, and within moments he was unconscious.

End of Chapter 2

27-Apr-2007 22:24:02 - Last edited on 21-Mar-2010 00:39:24 by Elitemage14

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28-Apr-2007 07:47:02

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Welcome everyone to the Adopt a Writer Program!
This thread is designed to help out some of the new, less experienced writers by pairing them up with one of the story forum's veterans. The available mentors will take those young padawans interested under their wings and help them grow and develop in their writing. These mentors would be a great resource by helping introduce their padawan to the story forum, showing them the ropes and how things work around here, answering any questions, and just being a source for feedback and criticism.
Interested? Then keep on reading.

28-Apr-2007 15:47:47 - Last edited on 24-Mar-2010 22:46:41 by Elitemage14

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Table of Contents
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29-Apr-2007 00:54:27 - Last edited on 24-Mar-2010 22:20:28 by Elitemage14

Elitemage14

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Potential Padawans:

If you are interested in having someone mentor you, then all you have to do is fill out the application below.
Once accepted your name will be added to the list of potential adoptees, and you can then either read through the list of mentors and ask for one of them to take you under their wing. Alternatively, you can hop around in front of the store window and wait for one of the mentors to choose you. Either way, once both parties agree the union will become official.

Padawan Application:
User name/Nickname:
How long have you been on the forums?:
Do you have any current stories still alive on this forum, and if so could you provide a name and quickfind code?:
What are your goals and what are you looking for in your mentor?:
Do you promise to be respectful towards your mentor and all those on this thread?:
Is there anything else you would like to tell us about yourself, like your preferred genre of writing or about your personality? (For example, if you are a very outgoing person who is all over the place, it might not be the best match to pair yourself up with a very quiet, serious mentor):

29-Apr-2007 14:44:54 - Last edited on 24-Mar-2010 22:47:12 by Elitemage14

Pogosheep0

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Souler Than
You have been banned for mass spamming.
Ascii-art / pictures are not allowed on the forums unless the forum rules make an exception, e.g. the 'Bored Draw #ere' sticky in forum games. In other places they are spam.
Overbumping a thread is also spam, especially when it's not your thread. Even if you did need to bump a thread simply posting the word 'bump' is all that is needed.
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30-Apr-2007 10:18:10

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