I understand. I'll do my best to keep this bumped for you when I can.
"It is our attitude at the beginning of a difficult undertaking which, more than anything else, will determine its successful outcome' - William James.
"It is our attitude at the beginning of a difficult undertaking which, more than anything else, will determine its successful outcome' - William James.
Very nice story, there are a few minor things that seem off but overall its a very well thought out storyline, characters are thought out, overall very excellent.
Bump
"It is our attitude at the beginning of a difficult undertaking which, more than anything else, will determine its successful outcome' - William James.
I'm sorry I haven't been writing guys. My life has been hectic since my house burned down at the beginning of June. Not to mention the fact that my manuscript was recovered days after the fact. This is the first time I've had internet access since that day. But don't worry. I'll get writing as soon as the dust is settled.
Keep it bumped!
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