~ December 2008 ~ (My Final Round of this Contest)
Roald lay, twisted and moaning, on his sickbed. Thalius, coerced into betrayal, suffered at the sight of his liege in agony, but the thought of his daughter’s suffering affected him more. Caught between two dire situations, Thalius, indeed, felt like a puppet on a string.
As the night wore on, Thalius walked the streets restlessly, seeking a way out of his dilemma. In a dark alley, in the deepest shadows, he came to speak with the Gypsy Aris. The thought of a possible solution gave him hope for his daughter’s future.
“Take this charm,” Aris said, “and place it in the King’s bedclothes, close to his heart. He will appear to die, yet if you drop this liquid on his funeral byre, he will live again and come back to full health. You must tell no one of this, not even the queen.”
Thalius took the charm with gratitude and hurried to the King’s side.
“How does he?* Thalius asked the Apothecary.
“Much the same. He is sinking.”
Thalius moved to the King’s side and took his limp hand. He leaned over and secreted the charm against the King’s heart. Turning, he looked at the Apothecary and shook his head. “I fear that he is slipping away as we watch.”
And, indeed, the King’s breathing faltered, he stilled, it appeared he was gone from this plane.
Having been paid, Thalius rushed to his daughter’s healer, purchasing the supplies she so desperately needed. Lily rose from her bed, color in her face for the first time in a month. Thalius clasped her to him, the most precious love in his life.
Roald’s funeral was the next day. Thalius and his daughter prepared to attend.
* This was my protion of the new final, I think I scored 12th or so out of 22.
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Leela Feliz