Thank you Vulcangod00
Feliz
Feliz
03-Jun-2010 00:33:31
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Well folks I'll be gone until the 6th of July please keep me bumped.
Feliz
Feliz
29-Jun-2010 16:26:17
BUMP. Hope you're having a great camping trip
03-Jul-2010 12:58:52
I am home! Thank you Dream & Rosh see you in soon.
Feliz
Feliz
06-Jul-2010 18:25:10
Hmm. . . a romance writer. . . haven't seen one of your kind in ages. Anyways, I read Romeo and Butterfly. Romeo was silly, and it made me “sort of” smile at the ending phrase. Butterfly, you see, was far different. The comparison between the beauty of the butterfly and the sadisitic nature of the wolf was truly gorgeous, but I realized some frightening grammar/spelling mistakes that threw me off my focus.
Remember to always proof-read your work.
Besides that, I did like those two stories and I may read more at a later date.
Remember to always proof-read your work.
Besides that, I did like those two stories and I may read more at a later date.
06-Jul-2010 18:39:46
Zircon Ace,
Thank you so very much for your feed back! It was nice to hear about the elements that you enjoyed specifically.
I have slowly been going through making changes to the different piece's, but for the most part I posted them here as they were in the different contests they were written for. That also accounts for some of the clumsy wording/grammar issues. The different contests had a word count or specific words to be used as writing parameters.
To guide you to some of my more polished work you might try my description of the word, The Rack, or Bleeding Love. I will edit in the location of The Word.
Feliz
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Thank you so very much for your feed back! It was nice to hear about the elements that you enjoyed specifically.
I have slowly been going through making changes to the different piece's, but for the most part I posted them here as they were in the different contests they were written for. That also accounts for some of the clumsy wording/grammar issues. The different contests had a word count or specific words to be used as writing parameters.
To guide you to some of my more polished work you might try my description of the word, The Rack, or Bleeding Love. I will edit in the location of The Word.
Feliz
Edit: Page 3 box 1 & 2
13-Jul-2010 03:19:08 - Last edited on 13-Jul-2010 03:32:31 by Leela Feliz
Thank you, Lame. I am pondering a little something we will see if an actual story happens from it.
Feliz
Feliz
19-Jul-2010 03:25:06
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