Jeez Hudson you scared me lol.
Thanks Hudson and Trenten for the bumps.
I'm glad you have membership and can post now Rao
I also thank the person who commented to me in game on my story, though I can't remember your name, sorry.
I'm glad so many people have found the story realistic and plausible. One of my greatest faults is with character development; my characters are always flat and unrealistic. I really struggled with creating his voice and accurate levels of emotion. I guess I did a satisfactory job of it, which is all I can ask.