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I deserved a bashing. I sounded like a pompous jerk.
Also, I'm really bad with English spelling so for that, I apologize.
Roshie, the truth is your story is honestly one of my favorite on the forums. It was purely because of this fact that I tried my hardest to find everything and anything that I thought made 'Outlander' less of a story than it could be.
I wanted to help you make it as close to perfect as you could get it, but I guess I overdid it a little.
If you think that I hated your story then you're wrong, I loved it. I just wish that in the review I gave you I wasn't so stressed out. (There was a math assignment I got through the mail that I had to research online, and ask a whole bunch of people to figure out how to do it. Yes, my school is mean its pupils
.) I'm pretty sure my stress showed in this review.
Even so...
I was indeed 'nit picky'. When I read the review I gave you over again, I got an empty feeling in my stomach, and I couldn't help but wonder, 'How could I even write that?'
If you want, I can write you another review later, one that you deserve. I put your story on my must read list for a reason and I want to make that clear.
I know that what I wrote gives you the impression that I was just being mean, but please keep in mind that I was simply trying to make it better than it already was. My intentions were good, but it certainly didn't come across that way.
Regards,
-Tycca
Also, I'm really bad with English spelling so for that, I apologize.
Roshie, the truth is your story is honestly one of my favorite on the forums. It was purely because of this fact that I tried my hardest to find everything and anything that I thought made 'Outlander' less of a story than it could be.
I wanted to help you make it as close to perfect as you could get it, but I guess I overdid it a little.
If you think that I hated your story then you're wrong, I loved it. I just wish that in the review I gave you I wasn't so stressed out. (There was a math assignment I got through the mail that I had to research online, and ask a whole bunch of people to figure out how to do it. Yes, my school is mean its pupils
.) I'm pretty sure my stress showed in this review.
Even so...
I was indeed 'nit picky'. When I read the review I gave you over again, I got an empty feeling in my stomach, and I couldn't help but wonder, 'How could I even write that?'
If you want, I can write you another review later, one that you deserve. I put your story on my must read list for a reason and I want to make that clear.
I know that what I wrote gives you the impression that I was just being mean, but please keep in mind that I was simply trying to make it better than it already was. My intentions were good, but it certainly didn't come across that way.
Regards,
-Tycca
05-Sep-2007 04:30:04
ah yes but may I point out that before my brothers post (muska234) you spelled last wrong
. no offense of course
. if i hurt your feelings anyway im sorry...
. no offense of course
. if i hurt your feelings anyway im sorry...
06-Sep-2007 01:20:06 - Last edited on 06-Sep-2007 01:24:45 by [#11AGKI6QW]
Woo! More activity and new readers here in the last day or two than I've had in quite some time.
Thanks for all the comments
Musaka (I forgot your name sorry), thanks for pointing out the typo. I wrote it quickly and take no offence whatsoever.
Dream and scoot, no need to apologise for furthering the review discussion. Discussion of any kind is welcome on my thread. As long as it's discussion and not flaming or spamming.
Thanks for all the comments
Musaka (I forgot your name sorry), thanks for pointing out the typo. I wrote it quickly and take no offence whatsoever.
Dream and scoot, no need to apologise for furthering the review discussion. Discussion of any kind is welcome on my thread. As long as it's discussion and not flaming or spamming.
07-Sep-2007 07:00:51
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