Hi, Roshie. I liked it. It encompasses with heavy imagery which very few can pull off, and your language is - although pretty average - used to a brilliant extent which shows your experience and skill in writing.
I think you have exhausted comments from this whole forum
Well done on completing it, too.
Edit: Also, would you mind reading something? I only posted it recently... Those Hidden.
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Thanks Le Horror
I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed reading it
The best part about writing is giving people enjoyment. But the compliments are pretty great too
Edited. I no longer find this part of the review important. Looking at how I was a few years ago, I was far too harsh and a bit of a persnickety critic.
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