I'm back!
I should warn you all that at the moment I'm in a slightly foul mood, but I hope to solve the cause tomorrow, either by quitting my job or having my boss fix the problem. Not something I wanted to come home to after a great week away (except for the unexpected death in the family)
Westo: there shall be more, but you will have to wait, or, if all goes according to plan, purchase a copy, as this summer I am starting to rewrite it into a full length story for publication. I won't be able to post it of course, but I will be letting a few select people read it at different stages.
This was just supposed to be a short story revolving around that particular instance, but like yourself I found it lacking and wanting more. It's too unfulfilled and unfinished.
05-Jul-2007 06:47:29