Good start, but a little unrealistic.
I would suggest using either Ardougne or Keldagrim- Both are more geographically suited than Varrock for a war with the Fremnik Province. And besides- Why should Varrock even care about a nation on the other side of the world?
If there's an explanation for it being Varrock, later in the story, you have every right to yell at me.
EDIT: In gladiatorial fights, it's customary for the emperor (or, in this case, the king) to point his thumb down for the man to be killed, up for him to live. Watch the movie Gladiator.
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