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Brief Loops

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I read a Christmas Dream and 'Fall';
A Christmas Dream felt that it went much to fast paced, even for a short story. I liked the concept, but for your usual writing I thought to see much more detail into it. But, I do understand it *is* a short story.
Fall was great, I really enjoyed it. I'll rate it a '4'.

04-Apr-2008 04:11:34

Chuk

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Oh, thanks. I'm kind of surprised at the rating on Fall. I usually don't do well with poetry.
And A Christmas Dream was severely limited by the 1500 word idea for the contest. It's just long enough that it has to be a real story, not just like an excerpt or something, but it doesn't leave room for my description.
And it was the first thing I wrote. I've improved during my time here.

But what you should read is my TIGA thing and the 500 word thing on page two.

04-Apr-2008 04:17:42 - Last edited on 04-Apr-2008 04:23:07 by Chuk