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Old Gnomish
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Old Gnomish

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I actually found 'Behind You' a good read, despite not being a major fan of second person. It's certainly an engaging start; starting a story with a sense (in this case sight) is always effective. My favourite line is the second one: "Through your peripherals you can see that the room is white – is it even a room at all?"
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17-Aug-2011 14:42:10

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First, thank you so much for your comments on my story! They were far too kind.
Next, I have to say this is easily some of the best writing on the forums. From the intense descriptions in "Vagary" to the brilliant experiment into the second person of "Behind You," your vocabulary and style are just amazing. Good luck on your Legend status, you certainly deserve it.

05-Sep-2011 20:57:03

Borna Coric

Borna Coric

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Hah, they were not at all too kind, but you are most welcome.
Thank you greatly for your comments, it is certainly joyful to see a new face around here with such talent. I hope you intend to stop and stay a while in these forums.

06-Sep-2011 12:47:35

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