This was my entry to round two of Mitch's "Survivor Two" contest. The theme was to answer a philisophical question in your story, and I approached it from the standpoint of the five senses. I won't reveal too much more, as you can probably work it out for yourself. While written in prose, the structure and language is quite verse-like, and it has its similarities to a poem. This entry achieved me first place in the round.
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-A Calm Tempest-
Imagine something. Anything. A prospect so incredible that it couldn’t possibly be true. Except it is. But it’s beyond that: you live it, and breathe it, and nurture it. It’s the reason you’re alive. It’s the reason you’re dead.
How can you truly know which one you fulfil?
A collision of life and death – the time before and the time after. It means nothing to you. All at the same time, you display a plethora of emotions. The happy and sad, the trust and contempt, the anger and submission. The anguish, and depression, and remorse, and guilt, and jealousy.
There is only one thing you feel. Pain.
The overloading flavour of a glowing mango, tingling on your tongue as you take chunks out of its juicy flesh. The fruit overloads your system and a shudder echoes through your body. A contrasting aftertaste presents itself to you in the form of a worm. The sweet and sour, the sharp and bland, the spicy and dull. The rancid, and repulsive, and lurid, and putrid, and fetid.
There is only one thing you can taste. Decay.
A kaleidoscope of colours, mutating and evolving as they crash: blood, and sweat, and tears. They mix and fuse again; an endless stream of new tones and hues. The red and green, the blue and orange, the yellow and purple. The charcoal, and ebony, and grey, and onyx, and obsidian.
23-Jun-2011 12:46:18
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Borna Coric