Great story, Malevolent. Good description, great storyline, and a marvelous title. You've outdone yourself this time.
I'd be honored if you could perhaps check out my latest works, Primordial Self-Cannibalism and The Torture of Queen Pestiley. Keep up the good work; this story is amazing! 5/5
Thanks Labryinths, I don't really use the story forums much anymore, I just bump my stuff when I have to. But I'll give one of your stories a quick look.