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lol sorry for the wait blackriku should hopefully be writeing soon hes just been busy

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29-Aug-2007 00:31:45

???: i am Raz

Sasha: ok can u let us out of here?

Raz: you seem trust worhty.. (hits a switch and the cage falls apart)

Lythen: Thanks

Maz: we should move on

Raz: No dont go! this island is dangerous you wouldnt make it far

Blackriku: he has a point

Sasha: i say we stay with him

Kyle: Im sure he doesnt want to share his home with a bunch of freaks

Sasha: (is about to punch kyle but raz breaks in)

Raz: Actuly i do want you arond! you have any idea how lonely it is here? in this old building! i thoght i was done for! but now perhaps we can escape this darn island!

Lythen: How? we dont got a boat!

Spicy: (howl)

Raz: Come..

(raz opens up the curtains to reveal a large golden elevator)

Sasha: Woah

Raz: step inside all of you theres plenty of room! Lets see.. floor.. 1

(the elevator slowly creaks down then stops)

Maz: amazeing! what is it

Raz: its a sub havent you heard of them?

Maz: Not relly..

Raz: hmm Anyway it still needs some parts.. i had them but the bloody creatures took them when they attacked

Kyle: when was that?

Raz: a few months ago.. the nearly blew up the entire building! so i had to make all sorts of traps

Blackriku: hehe and we totaly fell for it

Kyle:

Raz: ok so if you wanna get outa here the first part we need is the engine they draged it away toward the north..

Blackriku: you ARE comeing with us arnt you?

Raz: Me? err No sorry i gotta make sure they dont attack again!

Blackriku: (sigh)

Maz: can we borrow your weapons?

Raz: you think i would send you out there unarmed? of course not! take anything you need

Kyle: thanks sir we will leave tommow

Raz: k let me show you to your rooms..

End of chapter


I wont be posting for awhile so please bump this im going up north with my uncle again then i gotta go on a vacaction somewhere.. cant remeber but they dont got a computer..

And after that i need dentel surgery! Agh!

31-Aug-2007 05:38:44

So please keep this thread away from the forum monster AKA chewy and hopefully ill be back.. unless i get killed somehow in the surgery.. car acident.. ect.. i HATE surgery..

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