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**it's important to read this part of the story at night
with the lights off**
I would recommend reading this part, to this song "cazzette, beam me up (kill mode)"
Also, if you have read my story up until this point, I congratulate you for being able to battle my grammar
**
jack was confused what to do, He felt the urge to turn around, When suddenly jack feels something grab his back slightly, Jack turns around and sees a girl dressed in a belly dancer's clothes, her robes were a mixture of red and yellow, her face hidden behind a see though purple scarf. Jack looked at her eyes, wanting a answer for being touched, she giggled at jack
"de les ve ledo, les, de ve ledo ledo, ledo" he heard her almost purr
"I'm sorry I couldn't hear you, could you repeat that?"
"hello stranger" she smiled
"hi" jack nervously responded
"you look like a real treat" the girl said
she stepped closer
"I really must be going" jack said
"where do you have to go? on a full moon night?" she teased
"I forgot something" jack responded
She rose her left hand up, palm out, and blew onto it, a silvery dust hit jack's face.
Jack breathed it in
jack coughs hard
Jack looks around, his brain suddenly feels different, he feels euphoric
"hey, won't you come with me to the festival?"
The girl had jack's arm around her shoulder
"I have to get back to report..." jack said confused
"you have to come?, handsome" she said
"okay" jack replied
she lead jack to a circled area, with people everywhere, he saw the colors black and red every where.
take a seat, she told jack, she lead him to the fountain in the center, inviting him to sit on the fountain's sides. She told jack she would be back soon, as she smoothly walked away.
Jack saw a man breathing fire, 10 feet into the cold night air,
another man was juggling swords around.
with the lights off**
I would recommend reading this part, to this song "cazzette, beam me up (kill mode)"
Also, if you have read my story up until this point, I congratulate you for being able to battle my grammar
**
jack was confused what to do, He felt the urge to turn around, When suddenly jack feels something grab his back slightly, Jack turns around and sees a girl dressed in a belly dancer's clothes, her robes were a mixture of red and yellow, her face hidden behind a see though purple scarf. Jack looked at her eyes, wanting a answer for being touched, she giggled at jack
"de les ve ledo, les, de ve ledo ledo, ledo" he heard her almost purr
"I'm sorry I couldn't hear you, could you repeat that?"
"hello stranger" she smiled
"hi" jack nervously responded
"you look like a real treat" the girl said
she stepped closer
"I really must be going" jack said
"where do you have to go? on a full moon night?" she teased
"I forgot something" jack responded
She rose her left hand up, palm out, and blew onto it, a silvery dust hit jack's face.
Jack breathed it in
jack coughs hard
Jack looks around, his brain suddenly feels different, he feels euphoric
"hey, won't you come with me to the festival?"
The girl had jack's arm around her shoulder
"I have to get back to report..." jack said confused
"you have to come?, handsome" she said
"okay" jack replied
she lead jack to a circled area, with people everywhere, he saw the colors black and red every where.
take a seat, she told jack, she lead him to the fountain in the center, inviting him to sit on the fountain's sides. She told jack she would be back soon, as she smoothly walked away.
Jack saw a man breathing fire, 10 feet into the cold night air,
another man was juggling swords around.
01-Sep-2012 19:00:12 - Last edited on 02-Sep-2012 03:24:31 by [#ZY9ZVLC95]
happy break is gonna text me the story while he is at college,
**This section of the story is Gorey, if blood makes you sick or if you are under age you can skip this part**
jack saw A man dressed in black, the man held up his right hand to quiet the crowd which also had a short red sword in it, he started then sprinting at one end of the circle plaza then sprinting towards the fountain in the center, right as he was about to collide with the fountain he suddenly disappeared.
jack wondered where he was, then he heard a battle cry, and looked at the other side of the fountain to find the man swinging his sword, then the man disappeared suddenly mid swing of his attack. Then appeared at the other end of the fountain where he started and finished his swing.
the crowd cheers
"now everyone" a dark voice loomed over the plaza area.
"it is time for worship"
"hey you, let's go" Jack felt a jerk on his arm
It was the belly dancer girl
Jack barely knew what was happening, as she led jack into a crowd of people heading down, they were all walking down a bricked road, that was going down almost uncomfortably, jack would call it a tunnel, there were only a select few torches hung about the tunnel, making it almost hard to see where you are going.
Jack is lead by this girl for another 10 minutes
Then jack sees they are leaving the tunnel and he feels a carpet covered ground under his black leather shoes.
He see's two torches set up, one torch on each side of a big black chair with winding black horns flowing from it's right and left, with a big zamorackian symbol hung up above it.
He also see's a big metal ash gray in front of the throne chair with essence burning
everyone is walking towards a three big chests, jacks walks up to one of the chest, and sees it is filled with black robes, jack knows everyone else is grabbing them, so he does to.
there is a pig hung up in chains from the roof, that is dripping blood, the blood is flowing to a big black bowl
**This section of the story is Gorey, if blood makes you sick or if you are under age you can skip this part**
jack saw A man dressed in black, the man held up his right hand to quiet the crowd which also had a short red sword in it, he started then sprinting at one end of the circle plaza then sprinting towards the fountain in the center, right as he was about to collide with the fountain he suddenly disappeared.
jack wondered where he was, then he heard a battle cry, and looked at the other side of the fountain to find the man swinging his sword, then the man disappeared suddenly mid swing of his attack. Then appeared at the other end of the fountain where he started and finished his swing.
the crowd cheers
"now everyone" a dark voice loomed over the plaza area.
"it is time for worship"
"hey you, let's go" Jack felt a jerk on his arm
It was the belly dancer girl
Jack barely knew what was happening, as she led jack into a crowd of people heading down, they were all walking down a bricked road, that was going down almost uncomfortably, jack would call it a tunnel, there were only a select few torches hung about the tunnel, making it almost hard to see where you are going.
Jack is lead by this girl for another 10 minutes
Then jack sees they are leaving the tunnel and he feels a carpet covered ground under his black leather shoes.
He see's two torches set up, one torch on each side of a big black chair with winding black horns flowing from it's right and left, with a big zamorackian symbol hung up above it.
He also see's a big metal ash gray in front of the throne chair with essence burning
everyone is walking towards a three big chests, jacks walks up to one of the chest, and sees it is filled with black robes, jack knows everyone else is grabbing them, so he does to.
there is a pig hung up in chains from the roof, that is dripping blood, the blood is flowing to a big black bowl
02-Sep-2012 23:17:00 - Last edited on 04-Sep-2012 18:23:27 by [#HQVUKK0E7]
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