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"an illusion..." Jack said
"I almost lost my life back there" Feona said, Smiling at jack
"sorry, I should have found out what it was sooner" Jack said looking at the only physical part of the creature, The club.
Jack walked into view of the castle, The window wasn't lit anymore, The person had moved on.
Jack and feona walked out of the courtyard without hitting a invisible barrier.
"nice" Feona smiled
"Now just up this castle." jack said
Since jack had entered by graphing hook last time he had entered the castle, he found himself slightly puzzled when asked by feona how to enter the castle from the main entrance.
By light of his illuminated dagger he searched the walls and sides of the big lobby of the castle, the throne chair sitting erect in the middle.
"got it" Jack said
jack finally being able to spot the door by light of his dagger.
They entered the door, They found them selves in a room, There was a another room adjacent of the room they were in to there right, it looked like a large kitchen from what jack could tell, and also to there closer more immediate left was the familiar spiral stone stair case, that jack had previously used to get to feona.
"feels weird..." Feona half mumbled
"huh?" Jack asked
Jack looked at feona, She had her hand over her heart.
"It feels like my heart is vibrating..." Feona said, a far off look in her eyes
"I don't know...let's go" Jack said
They both started to go up the stairs as fast as they could without endangering themselves due to the lack of light and the alien place they did not know very well.
"it's getting stronger..." feona said
Jack Could now feel a weird pull on his chest, a slight shaking of his torso.
"weird..., never felt that before" Jack said
They continue going up the stairs
"I think this is the ladder that leads to the top" Jack said to feona
"That vibrational feeling is so strong..." feona replies
"you ready?" jack asks
"yeah." feona says
Jack and feona both climb up the ladder,

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jack swiftly opens the wooden panel at the top, Jack see's a glimpse of the night sky before emerging out onto the top of the castle.
He looks around as feona is emerging, He see's to the far left of him a faint glow a disruption in the night,
Jack finds to his surprise a glowing magical outlined circle onto the brick of the castle, There were witches dressed in black hooded robes. Each sat upon a different weird glowing symbol. There was some type of ruby chalice in the middle of the circle, The witches had drawn a special outline around it. Jack remembered it previously when it was used at the zamorack's gathering.
The witches are all chanting in a harmonic hum with each other, Jack could make out a weird language he had never heard before. The ruby chalice begun to shake. Jack looked under the cup, To find that a mass of darkness was gathering. Jack's first instinct was to stop whatever they were doing, He casted basic ice spell at the closest witch. Only to find it rebounded back at him hitting some type of barrier, He had to duck to dodge it in the nick of time.
Jack and feona attempt to break the concentrations of the witches, but there is a other worldly force field surrounding the witches, "ice blitz!" "ice blitz!" "Ice Blitz!!!" Jack fired off three consecutive spells in a row shooting at three different witchs all at once, The frozen hail like balls touch the barrier but bounce back at jack and feona. "Jack stop it!" Feona cries. "it's no use..."
The witches continue there chanting, The ruby chalice in the middle suddenly files out of the middle of the circle and into the dead of the night. One of the witches a particallay gruesome looking one, lets loose a goulish laugh. "It's almost done, Keep going my damsels of the night!" Jack and feona watch on in horror, they can both see the dark mass where the ruby chalice use to be is growing at a exceptional rate.

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The large mass of shadows in the middle of the circle, starts to take shape, It forms a large serpent like shadow. Jack watches it slither it's long body on the ground. The large serpent lets out a loud hiss, Jack stops himself from the impulse of covering his ears.
"damn it!" Jack yells as he runs into the barrier, He pulls out his dagger, as He is about to strike the barrier he yells "Ice Blitz!", His small dagger suddenly lights up with a ice cold glow. The dagger feels ice cold in jack's hand but he also feels as if it is burning like fire. Jack slahes hugely with the blade, The once invisble barrier turns a light blue, feona can see it is in a shape of a large bubble surrouding the small circle of witches. From the point of impact where jack had slahed it, The barrier goes away slowly this spreads to the rest of the barrier like bubble.
"You are to late, hero" one of the witches the one who seemed to be the leader, Had gotten up from her sitting postion and had feona in her grasp
"if you do anything I will end the journey for this poor girl, now stay still" The witch holds feona tightly with a crude looking dagger.
Jack looked at feona, Then back to the circle, The witches continued to chant. Jack looks down at the shadow serpent, the ground starts to shake, Jack hears a loud roar, Suddenly the serpent roars again and this time it sprouts wings and legs.
"a dragon.." Jack thought
Suddenly all the witches scream at once, and fall limply to the sides from there sitting positions.
Jack watches as the shadow dragon figure grows larger to monster propotions, then watches as it leaves the circle and off the edge of the castle's roof.
The sound is tremendous as the wind pushes jack's hair roughly back and causes him to squint his eyes. He is watching a fully shaped darler then night dragon fly off the castle amd into the sky.
"okay, you got what you wanted, Now let her go." Jack says while turning to face the witch again
Jack can't find the witch or feona anywher

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Jack's heart skips a beat
"F E O N A!" He yells. His eyes darting from side to side searching for her
He dashes over to one of the limp witches
He roughly shakes her up "Where did she take her?!" Jack almost cries into the witche's face
The witch's head is limp to the side
"Damn it!" "just when I thought I got her back..." Jack stares into the direction of where the dragon flew off.
The sun is begining to rasie.
jack walks out of the town only to discover all the shadow creatures had been suck dry of there shadowy essence leaving only bones in the wake. Jack makes his way out of the city only to be greeted by his old team that he abandoned to go whole heartly after feona.
Leonard steps delicately infront of his team.
"Jack you went agasin'* orders." He states dryly, Giving jack a slightly irriated look.
"You are in the Elf's king presence, so please bow and be courteous."
A group of white clothed elves march though the gate,
Jack hears a horse trotting and hears someone get off of it.
The soliders suddenly bow on one knee and so does jack's old team.
Jack bows also.
The elf king appears a fine white intricate leafs woven rests on his head in the shape of a crown.
The king stops infront of jack. "all rise" The king speaks
Jack gets up, "please tell me what happened here solider" The king says
Jack admits he doesn't quite understand what befell the city, but explains that the inhabitants are now all bones, and also explains the rest.
"it seems to me, That the ritual the witches did sucked all the city's inhabitants of there life force to summon this strange dragon." Jack finished
The king looks as if something clicks in his head.
"that is good solider" the king finshes

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They are sailing back on the king's boats, Jack finds himself resting on the stair case, refusing to enjoy himself with his team, He hears them laughing and drinking possibly playing some type of a game down stairs. Jack stares up at the stars, "I can't enjoy myself knowing that feona might be hurt or worst, I can't possibly rest for one second..." Jack's eyes search the stars for any meaning of some kind. "I don't even know why I'm here on this earth..., What's the point...All I do is suffer, All I am..." Jack feels the coldness of the night as the wind blows lightly against his black fitted clothes clothes.
"What are you doing out here buddy?"
Jack looks to the side of him, It's nightstalker
"I can't fight all day, can I?" Jack asks with a grin
"No, you can't. But why don't you join the team downstairs?" Nightstalker asks
"we are having one hell of a time, We did risk our lives after all" He adds
"I will later." Jack lies
"alright suit yourself" nightstalker walks down stairs
Jack hears them rejoice at nightstalker rejoining them.
"what if i just jumped off the boat and drowned to my death?" Jack asks himself joking in his mind
"and what exactly happened when I casted my ice blitz spell and it engulfed my dagger and it had so much power it could break the witch's barrier that normal spells couldn't.. jack comtemplated
When they arrive back at the houses of elysian(the elves village of sorts)
Jack is invited to stay at Miss elysian's house again, He goes there and tells miss elysian about feona getting kidnapped right when he had saved her. She tries to reassure jack, that Zamorack wouldn't hurt her, Because of her status and power to be used as a bartering item if needed. Jack agrees with her, but still feels guilty about the whole ordeal.
Jack can't sleep, he stays up thinking of ways to get to feona. When mourning comes, Jack heads off in pursuit of the elf king.
realizing he has no idea where to find the king, He heads back to elysian to ask her for direction

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"Jack, I know you want to rescuse feona, but you can't just go into the king's chamber and demand information about Zamorack, He is the king, and also He is not currently with us." miss elysian comments
"He's not here, at the houses of elysian?" Jack asks
"no, He and his men are most likely riding towards eldoron, There recently has been a uprising of goblins there, The city of the white armored king." miss elysian replies
jack says nothing
"which direction is this city?" jack asks
"I don't know, but your team is scheduled to do work up there soon, So i suppose you can wait until then" Miss elysian says
"Your daughter..." Jack continues
"My daughter, I'm sure is safe, she has royal blood as I said, She is of to much importance to be hurt or harmed"
Jack remembers that night when jack had witnessed one of the unearthly rituals of Zamorack involving feona.
"Yes, We are indeed scheduled to travel south east across Gielinor to the city of the white armored king, We were instructed to rest a day and leave the next" Leonard had said to jack earlier today
"Well, That is one day wasted" Jack thought, browsing though the books present in the room elysian had let him stay in.
The next day Leonard and his team of elite elf specialists set off to adventure in the direction of south east Gielinor to the city of the white armored king, who stories tell had the most marvelous city in all of Gielinor, with white washed walls that radiated the sun of of them, and a flower bed that spreads across the perimeter of the entire city.

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The group was equipped with fine steads of the elves, elegant and slick they were, carrying large bags of supplies on each side of the strange animals, whom made the most peculiar sounds. The animals they rode on, Jack thought looked to be between a horse and a serpent, The bodies of these animals were longer then normal horses, but also much more slender and less muscular, with the legs ending in long almost elegant legs, not as fast as a normal horse jack noticed, It's motion swaying from side to side reminding jack of how a Caterpillar moves.

18-Sep-2012 03:59:42 - Last edited on 03-Nov-2012 02:55:44 by [#HQVUKK0E7]

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If anyone is reading this story, I will bump it when I update it, But for now I'm just going to be writing the story down in my notebook and continue writing at home, seeing as I am going over seas in a fine fancy cruise across the carribein, as such is my life(lol jk, actually just going afk for a while)

will update story in 2-3 days and I will be sure to bump it when I do, Until we meet again mighty explorer of the runescape forms...

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SPOILERS

jack wanders into the forest after hearing from the local villagers that a monster has been plaguing them( a jungle wyrm) Jack travels into the forest encountering all different types of creatures including a meat eating plant, giant mushrooms and a great big praying mantis that can talk. once he gets to the desination he finds to his amaze a boat on the side of the said lake that is supposed to house the jungle wyrm, Jack goes to the house to the side of the lake and speaks with one of the natives whom is a lizard sub human, Jack agures with the lizard then finally bribes him to take him to the wyrm's liar, jack fights the wyrm which is huge.(it is up to me to decide how fun this battle will be

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Jack is baffled, He tells eldoron this, who simply says his men would not do such a thing, Jack suspects foul play is at hand.
Jack asks the elf king if Zamorack could have anything to do with this, the king replies there most likely isn't since the goblin's guards had witnessed the white armored knights slay the cheif's daughter beofre there very eyes,
The king hears news of a city Eldoron the land of the white armored king is under attack by goblins, whom they had a previous contract with, The goblins have been recently sieging there city, and The king of eldoron is baffled with disbelief at the treaty being broken. While the elf king is attempting to sort everything out, and guard the city with eldoron's men, Jack inventigates the goblin city, south of eldoron, only to discover the Cheif goblin's daughter had been killed recently by a round of white armored men belived to be from eldoron.

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