I read both of your stories. They were very well written and exciting. If I had to choose one, I would say 'The Fatal Glitch' because it has more suspense and is the only story I have read in the forums to show Runescape as a game, and to venture outside of it.
You're a very talented writer, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please don't leave this story on a cliffhanger!