I'm very impressed and will be waiting for more. I'm really tired as I've been working all day and it's passed midnight, yet I couldn't sleep until i finished this great story. I have to admit that i was sad when i saw that last post of the story. Great writing.
27-Jun-2008 08:15:28
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27-Jun-2008 08:15:51
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Billy14joe
Fatal Glitch...Hmm, didn't think much of it first...
Good thing I checked it out otherwise I would've missed out on a fair bit.
I've been reading ever since the story was first posted, I am constantly checking on the forums just to read the next part of the story!
LOVE the storylineYou can tell there is going to be a massive twist at the end...No wait, you can't
That's how good the story is
Keep it up Carrot, we all know this IS one of the best!