Bloody brilliant. Death Note comes to mind upon reading over the story. I'm not sure if there was any inspiration caused by it, but this story is truely interesting and addicting.
I thought of the idea for this story a while ago, then started watching Death Note a week or so after. It HAS inspired some parts, largely the character for A.
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One word to describe this: OUTSTANDING! this is exciting and thrilling. It is the best story so far and it is not even finished yet! Please finish it I am looking forward to reading it!
you should also be a writer and please hurry it is fantastic!While i was reading it, the story reminding me about death note how he choses what death he wants. And death note is my favorite anime so you can see why I love this story
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I love stories like Death Note mostly because the antagonist always comes so close to winning only to lose. He is left cold, alone, revealed. It's interesting those last moments of his triumph before he plummets.
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