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[#M39PX6V8E]

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Guess what? I read this story and now I am FREAKED OUT!!! And I never freak out when reading books or stories.

18-Jul-2009 02:10:27

Amane

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That was a scary story yes but also it was a very very well written one

18-Jul-2009 02:39:57

Zibo1

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Wowow! I haVNT POSTED FOR OVER hALf a YEAR!! NOOOOO!

20-Jul-2009 04:38:23

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Oss Spy

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Use smaller words (it took me a while to sort through but I managed) and you will attract more readers, instead of driving them away because they can't understand what you're saying.
Otherwise 8/10

20-Jul-2009 05:54:01

KuddlesWorth

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that was such a good storyy, you need to add more to it, im dying to know how it ends. 10/10. get this publish as a short story irl dude.

20-Jul-2009 05:56:01

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Oss Spy

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Read the table of contents and you'll see it has ended.

20-Jul-2009 06:42:13

Infinity A8

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Oss Spy: Er...'smaller words'? Precisely what do you mean by this? Can you provide some examples?

20-Jul-2009 12:24:10

[#IV2US93JZ]

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ah tht story is very well thought out, though i would like to see where these other ppl wwho had the glitch r doing..

20-Jul-2009 15:20:30

Sasser

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Amazing story, it made fishing monks alot more exciteing. lol
You need to add more to it! 10/10
Also i agree xypher, you should get it published, i would buy it =D

20-Jul-2009 18:59:20

Gameaddict27

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Agreed I C U. What a great way to pass the time!

20-Jul-2009 21:19:37

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[#M39PX6V8E]

Amane

Zibo1

Oss Spy

KuddlesWorth

Oss Spy

Infinity A8

[#IV2US93JZ]

Sasser

Gameaddict27