Woah...
This is one of the rare stories that took me away, away from a carbon-polluted world and into the world of the freedom and imagination of a talented young writer.
I was barley aware of my surroundings. My heart was thumping with suspense. A story raley makes me feel like this. The Fatal Glitch did.
This story seems to good to not be real. Its a bummer to think to yourself none of this is real.
The pen (or, in this case, the keyboard) is mightier than the sword. This was definately the case for you times INFINITY. I reckon you are a child prodigy (no offense if you are older than I suspect).
Carrotman, you should use this skill to your advantage. I'd like to see this novel published, like Betrayal At Falador was.
Keep up the good work. I will bump thos topic. I had to search ****** to continue reading this, which is a pity. If people gave the time and patience to read novels, this would still be on the first page.
Again, good work. I hope to see more stories from you soon.
I will try and add you.
-Dragr Fan 95
05-Jul-2009 07:19:13
