I was just browsing through the stories of the forums and i must say, this was the most captivating story i have read on the whole forums (thats not about nooobs!)
At first this looked like some random story that lasted 3 posts and was a boring read :p but it was well written only parts that kind of confused me was constant speaking but with no pointers on who said what but thats okay.
Kudos to you and keep writing these magnificent stories! 9.9999 out of 10 you can get extra marks by giving me a cookie
P.S you've made me scared of people while playing Runescape i might call them Runemares yes?
28-Apr-2009 16:04:20
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28-Apr-2009 16:07:32
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Miyuuki
This is honestly the BEST (maybe second best) story I have ever read on these forums. I am also a fan of Death Note, which I could not help but notice this had many similarities to.
- epic detective known by a letter. (A/L)
- ability to kill indiscriminently with the choice of how the death occurs.
-many parties working to solve the same mystery.
-the "slight case of insanity" taken on by the antaganist.
anywho, I most certainly give this story a 10/10. mind you, thats a first for any story on the forums.
SN9
A should have been named O, because it goes L, Near, Mello, O (L, *,N, O). Also, Adrian should have been a japanese guy named Light Yagami, just for kicks.
03-May-2009 06:42:30
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03-May-2009 06:44:13
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[#WD5H6PRW7]
Ugh, you wouldn't believe how much harder that made this to write. All throughout the story I'm going "Damn it, that sounds like Death Note," and trying to think of ways to avoid it. Evidently, I failed.
ooh! hey carrotman. It's been a while since i read this story so forgive me if they couldn't do this:
You said that Jagex couldn't make it so that players couldn't play right? So, they should have just made it so that they couldn't gain any xp or get any drops from monsters! (or gather any resources. Like when they fish, they wouldn't get any fish) Then no one would have any reason to play! lol
God, i just read the last two posts of your story and realized i'd forgotten how ass-kicking good your stories are!
03-May-2009 22:49:32
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03-May-2009 22:52:34
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Pigwig70
They could have, but if there was something stopping Jagex from banning accounts then it would also prevent them from altering the game in such a way as to make it unplayable (secretly, I'm going to explain it in my next story.) Also they wouldn't be able to figure out who was killing everyone if that was the case.
04-May-2009 07:52:42
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04-May-2009 07:57:27
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Infinity A8