I loved when after you finished the story, you added in that you wish you had a soft drink during that time. It made the story seem like it would be everlasting and made it so that it wasn't depressing to see such a awesome story go to an end.
Gratz on forum mod, first time I saw. Nice story, by the way. I kinda pity Siegfried though, nice guy yet he's on the streets (ya, I read the end) he should always be in the house