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O Teragard
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Reserving a couple spaces in case I have more ideas (or in case you give them to me!)

Please go ahead and post now! I want all the feedback, good, bad, and ugly
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11-May-2020 04:07:44

AttilaSquare

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Spaeror,

I like these.

The first one doesn’t seem right - it doesn’t seem likely that someone who introduce a journal entry so grandly, with a centuries-wide perspective. I think it can be dropped without much loss of information.

I’d like to know what the signs of the impending invasion of Forinthry are!

Why does Ma’akra write a second note only after 40 years? Maybe his character could be filled out in more notes in between so that the first two notes already written fit into a more natural context.

Regarding the notes by Zaros, he doesn’t seem so much like a scientist to me, regardless of his association with “reason” - maybe I am reading into his character what I’d like it to be, but I don’t see him expressing excitement about the details of herbological experimentation.

I find the mission and party of Scalatrix very intriguing.

Good work.

13-May-2020 02:52:50

O Teragard
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AttilaSquare said :
Spaeror,

I like these.

The first one doesn’t seem right - it doesn’t seem likely that someone who introduce a journal entry so grandly, with a centuries-wide perspective. I think it can be dropped without much loss of information.

I’d like to know what the signs of the impending invasion of Forinthry are!

Why does Ma’akra write a second note only after 40 years? Maybe his character could be filled out in more notes in between so that the first two notes already written fit into a more natural context.

Regarding the notes by Zaros, he doesn’t seem so much like a scientist to me, regardless of his association with “reason” - maybe I am reading into his character what I’d like it to be, but I don’t see him expressing excitement about the details of herbological experimentation.

I find the mission and party of Scalatrix very intriguing.

Good work.


Thanks so much for checking this out and providing feedback! I'll definitely take what you've said and find ways to apply it to my post. I liked the first age letters just because they emphasized how different the world was, but in hindsight I do think that the first age wasn't absent of conflict. I should add a letter detailing the gnome's discovery of a true danger and using illusion magic to subdue it or something. Like ice giants or something else that might have inhabited forinthry.
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18-May-2020 19:40:26

O Teragard
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Journal of Eltonck, cir. year 486, the first age

Our village was invaded by giants last week. Huge creatures made of ice, who come from the plateau in the north. Our dwarven allies promised to come to our aid, but then they too were invaded and suffered heavy casualties. My old friend Thurgar may not make it, but now is a time for action.

The day after the second invasion I managed to pull together a project decades in the making. Eight trees surrounding our two villages now appear as giants twice their size, and should they come for further spoils, they will be faced with what appears to be their demise. It should work, now only time will tell.

Journal of Thurgar, cir. year 488, the first age

It worked! I can't believe it but these now beasts of trees have kept the invaders at bay for two full years now. Eltonck has impressed me with his prowess in illusory magic. With our combined skills, we may be able to last for generations, no matter the threat.

Guthix nearly became personally involved when he saw what happened to me and my kin in the battle for our land, but he waited and saw that indeed we have it under control. I was a little angry at the time but admittedly, I feel more capable now and will have forever changed. Guthix walks this land often but talks of going to sleep for a time and we will need to be capable of self-determination when he does so. It will be a shame when he does, but hopefully we have him around a little longer.
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18-May-2020 21:12:40 - Last edited on 18-May-2020 21:47:19 by O Teragard

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Edited the Zamorakian infantry orders according to new information I gleaned from the Desperate Times quest. Apparently Zamorak was losing, not winning, and that is why he used the stone. Click here for ideas on exploring other worlds, specifically the human homeworld Teragard. This one's me baby

20-May-2020 19:13:01

AttilaSquare

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O Teragard said :
AttilaSquare said :
Spaeror,

I like these.

The first one doesn’t seem right - it doesn’t seem likely that someone who introduce a journal entry so grandly, with a centuries-wide perspective. I think it can be dropped without much loss of information.

I’d like to know what the signs of the impending invasion of Forinthry are!

Why does Ma’akra write a second note only after 40 years? Maybe his character could be filled out in more notes in between so that the first two notes already written fit into a more natural context.

Regarding the notes by Zaros, he doesn’t seem so much like a scientist to me, regardless of his association with “reason” - maybe I am reading into his character what I’d like it to be, but I don’t see him expressing excitement about the details of herbological experimentation.

I find the mission and party of Scalatrix very intriguing.

Good work.


Thanks so much for checking this out and providing feedback! I'll definitely take what you've said and find ways to apply it to my post. I liked the first age letters just because they emphasized how different the world was, but in hindsight I do think that the first age wasn't absent of conflict. I should add a letter detailing the gnome's discovery of a true danger and using illusion magic to subdue it or something. Like ice giants or something else that might have inhabited forinthry.
Ah - I meant only Eltonck’s first letter, not the whole batch!

Also, yw! I like the new letters too.

20-May-2020 21:23:21 - Last edited on 20-May-2020 21:24:21 by AttilaSquare

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In case it inspires any fun thoughts, I’ll share a little more of my own headcannon:

As part of my Epic of Ikov, I wrote about a time when Ikov visited a pocket dimension preserved by Guthix: a huge circular chamber with a great dome, mostly buried underground, along the wall of which stood 250 stone altars dedicated to Guthix, each built by one of the noble families of Gielinor’s dwarves in the 1st age. Although Guthix did not desire worship, he accepted the hall of altars as a gift from them and kept it as a secret place for himself.

Detail: The floor, the wall, and the dome were dark stone. A little light came through small open windows at the rim of the dome. The diameter of the chamber was about 150 meters, as was the height of the wall. About 10 meters from the wall stood a fence of stone archways, each archway rising to about 3 meters high. The fence divided the center of the chamber from its outer ring. The fence of archways opened before the entrance to the chamber and opposite this.

Along the wall, each altar was cut in a different shape and from a different sort of stone. Each was decorated with a different emblem, and with precious gems and metals. Against the wall far opposite the entrance to the chamber, barely visible from the entrance through the darkness, through the openings in the fence of arches, stood the largest altar - elevated two steps above the rest, cut from white stone, and adorned with a star made from eight, large, long, and slender sapphires.

Before the great altar, at the opening in the fence of arches, stood a tall stone pulpit on the left and a short stone table on the right. Whatever rites the dwarves performed at that table, at the pulpit, at the altars, and at the high altar were long forgotten, known then only to Guthix.

20-May-2020 21:57:33 - Last edited on 21-May-2020 22:46:44 by AttilaSquare

O Teragard
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AttilaSquare said :
Ah - I meant only Eltonck’s first letter, not the whole batch!

Also, yw! I like the new letters too.


Oh! What about the first letter do you think is off? I think of that one as an introduction to the setting where the rest of the letters take place... I'm not sure how to adjust it.
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22-May-2020 00:19:38

O Teragard
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AttilaSquare said :
In case it inspires any fun thoughts, I’ll share a little more of my own headcannon...


Interesting headcanon! I'd be intrigued how to get to this pocket dimension. I've also always been interested in what Guthixian worship was like, especially since he discouraged it.
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22-May-2020 00:24:35

AttilaSquare

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O Teragard said :
AttilaSquare said :
Ah - I meant only Eltonck’s first letter, not the whole batch!

Also, yw! I like the new letters too.


Oh! What about the first letter do you think is off? I think of that one as an introduction to the setting where the rest of the letters take place... I'm not sure how to adjust it.

I don’t think you need an introduction. For the story to begin “I made a friend today...” is a perfect way to start. That author is a gnome becomes clear quickly.

22-May-2020 01:44:09

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