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Poller5
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Yeah, I'm sorry about the lack of adds, really. I've got cousins here, and we've been out doing stuff early evrey morning and getting home late.

So I'm not going to promise anything, however I won't abondon this story, so please bear with me.

11-Jul-2007 16:14:44

Mattman875

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Sweet! Sweet, sweet; and even sweeter!

Blooooooooooooooooooooooooooood... O_o

Oh, and to improve... Maybe some more blood? :P

Be careful with your word choice in battles: you repeated yourself a few times (the word 'trolls' was used a lot, and 'size' was used twice in quick succession) and try to keep to pace as neat as possible.

Otherwise, nice job. :D

13-Jul-2007 20:03:29 - Last edited on 13-Jul-2007 20:05:10 by Mattman875

Poller5
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Chapter 23

The ogres and trolls fell back before the furious onslaught, and were systematically cut down by the elves, men and dwarves. Gul’dan looked around the battlefield after the last of the ogres was slain by an elven mage, and almost retched, for the plains were literally littered with the dead and dying, the ground stained by their blood. He was soon joined by the Kings, but before they could attempt to help the wounded the gates of Gornakhan opened once more, and from them spewed goblins in numbers never seen or imagined by the forces of the Alliance.

Galaphile called out to the men, elves, and dwarves and once more the army formed up. Magic crackled from the hands of the elven magi in an attempt to cut back on the number of goblins the foot soldiers would have to fight. To the dismay of all who looked on the magic never came close to the goblins, as by some unseen might they were shielded from it. Undeterred the magi channelled even more of their power at the goblins to no avail: whatever protected them was beyond the might of the elves.

Seeing this and sensing a feeling of hopelessness from the troops gathered behind him Galaphile raised his voice and said “They may be protected from our magic, but they are not protected from physical weapons!” And as he said this he withdrew from the ground next to him a goblin spear and hurled it with inhuman speed at the front ranks of the goblins. The spear flew straight and true, and with great might did it strike the leader of the goblin charge, impaling him along its length.

“Behold! They still bleed!” the King of Varrock yelled out. From his sheath once more his sword was pulled, and beside him the other kings did the same, and as one they commenced yet another charge. The two forces met as a wave meets the rocks of a cliff and the goblin line was broken in two different locations, but the rifts were soon mended.

18-Jul-2007 17:47:08

Poller5
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It soon became apparent to the elven magic users that there were many goblin shamans who accompanied this wave of goblins, and that they were spreading carnage among the unprotected men and elves, though the dwarves were not hindered, as they have a natural immunity to magic, not dissimilar to that of the dragons. Quickly the elven magi flew to destroy the shamans, but the numbers of shamans was far great than the number of elven magi. Though individually an elven mage is stronger than a goblin shaman, many elves found themselves outnumbered; and the casualties among them were heavy.

Despite the aid of the shamans the goblins found themselves hard pressed to gain any ground on the forces of the Alliance, for the righteous cause of the Alliance lent each man strength the not even the hatred of the goblins could overcome. However the number of goblins was tenfold that of the Alliance and they slowly began to push the forces of the alliance back.

18-Jul-2007 17:47:30

Poller5
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Alright, for those of you reading this, this will be my last post for the next five days, as I will be going to the land of the Scots, where they have not invented the internet yet.

As such I beseach you all to bump this thread, and to save my creation from the page 51 monster

22-Jul-2007 21:38:35

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