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xxsuperstarx

xxsuperstarx

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I have a question for you. Why do you go around telling people they are horrible writers? I have been looking through threads, and I have found you are very critical. You would not like it if people insulted you openly. Give people constructive criticism. Do not go around saying people's stories suck be constructive. For all other people reading this is not about me, for quite frankly he has not even read my story, I am just angry he is spiteful to people. That can really have an effect on someone.

04-Apr-2009 22:54:40

Oss Spy
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Oss Spy

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Two words for your story:
KICK
ASS

I didn't read the whole thing, but from the prologue and the first chapter it kept me interested. Most stories make me fall asleep, but that was unique. You did go a little overboard on what players say in runescape, but otherwise it was excellent.
EDIT: Oh and add me :)

04-Apr-2009 23:50:35 - Last edited on 04-Apr-2009 23:55:29 by Oss Spy

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