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Crud23

Crud23

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Ummm Captain Crud, leader of Echo Company Rangers. I want to be in this story because I think it kicks major ass. I know that Captain Crud is a crappy name but I couldn't think of a good one that uses the words CRUD in it. Since my name sucked I added in the unit which is 1st Battalion Echo Company, UNSC RANGERS. This may not be the most convincing prompt but I'll continue to correct my error till I get it right :P WHile my official name is Captain Crud, Echo Company usually goes by code names, I'm cougar. This good enough lol. :P

04-Apr-2009 04:12:07 - Last edited on 04-Apr-2009 04:46:52 by Crud23

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Oss Spy

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Frod Hound Said-
dude it's one of your rules to have constructive critisim, and you don't do that on my story?
one thing, make the chapters longer.
your not much better than me.
and give me a break im in 6th grade
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You are a terrible writer.
I'm sure I am better than you, as I have wonderful things called 'supporters' and I do not need a supporters list to show that.

04-Apr-2009 04:55:51

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Crud23, if you couldn't even get past my prologue, then you wouldn't like half of the stories on the forums.
And you say I don't have description, look at your story. I know it's in a journal form, but I don't know what Blackburn, Macmillan or any of the other characters look like.
I don't even see descriptions of the area.
P.s
I don't think cigarettes exist in Runescape.

04-Apr-2009 13:59:16

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