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Citizen Meme
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Citizen Meme

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everything's good except the, um... I don't quite remember what its called. But your sentences are too long, and you don't specify what "it" might mean (eg. parts of the sky were green, others were red. That was my favorite color." which color was his favorite?).
I do the same thing very often, so, accepted! Just watch out for that, it can make things confusing. Very.

01-Jun-2008 21:13:52

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Matt, Apprentice of the Assassin is LOOOOONG dead. And I'm re writing H1 - The Trap as SST1 -- Elemental-Talker.
So, my only good story now is Legacy of the Three Kings.
Replying to Doom's story... I know it is fast paced, but the characters are people every teenager wants to read about. The descriptions are good, and the fight scenes, in quality AND battle techniques, are brilliant.

01-Jun-2008 21:27:25

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