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Logan Shafts
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Chapter 9: The systematic suicide of an accidental God slayer.

I have found that in my life, the seemingly insignificant choices I make inevitably lead to catastrophic changes. I deemed myself the most unlucky man in Morytania.

For instance, I had chosen to get up and make breakfast early, for personal reasons. At the same time, Zamorak’s men invaded Canifis with orders to 'capture the first man you see cooking'.

Apparently Zamorak wanted a meal. But I only knew how to cook shrimp, so I attempted to appear calm, like the normal kind of guy I usually try hard to pretend to almost be. As they carried me off my heart sank, the universe simply wouldn't leave me alone.

They marched me immediately to Zamorak’s dwelling. I was blindfolded and brought before him, then pushed down to the ground in a bow.

I heard Zamorak rise to speak. Everyone else choked on their words.
"This man is my champion, a fighter far beyond any of you." His rumbling voice filled the room strangely with silence, just as my bowels filled strangely with surprise.

Champion? What?

I felt my blindfold being removed, but my head was held down so I could only see the floor.
"I now dub you Sir Mortimer Harkeener. Bring the man his armor." There was the voice again. This time my bowels threatened to leak surprise all over the floor, if I didn't immediately remedy the situation.

"Oh by the way, do you have any of that breakfast left over?" Zamorak’s voice cracked, almost as if in embarrassment, and his stomach rumbled.

"Yes, my lord."
I didn't elaborate, didn't explain that I had made a far less insignificant choice that morning, and laced that breakfast with poison "powerful enough to kill a God" - according to the salesman. Of course, some salesmen were supernaturally inspired with lies of that sort.

24-Apr-2010 06:19:00 - Last edited on 24-Apr-2010 06:23:33 by Logan Shafts

Logan Shafts
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Two men walked up behind me, shaking and sweating as they carried armor and my breakfast to their lord. MY breakfast. I had made that. I intended to die from it, he couldn't steal my suicide. I consented myself by staring at their shoes in a manner that would make anybody uncomfortable.

Defiantly, I made another seemingly insignificant decision. I looked up, just in time to see Zamorak taking a bite.
"Insolence!" He announced. My surprise slid down my legs to the floor, and then I felt a surge of pure pain, and plunged into black, black oblivion.

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Chapter 10: The Journal.

A few excerpts from my mind:

I am Zamorak. As a God, I view many potential realities at the same time. In essence, I exist as multiple people. Perhaps I exist as everyone, and don't know it.

I could even exist as people close to myself. Even relatives, which would explain why I don't like any of them...

I'm slightly depressed, now, because I just wrote that, and now reading it again, it appears that I don't like myself. But my counselor would have said this was a positive step.

That’s why he's dead.

Anyways, back to the issues.

In each of those realities, I limit myself, through imagination, and I entertain myself through toil, as well as pleasure.

In this instance, it had occurred to me:
Who can kill a God, but a God?
I mean, I thought I was invincible, because Guthix wouldn't have the balance upset, and Saradomin is a wimp and can't kill me.

But maybe in my mind, I can kill myself, as a different 'person'.

So I tested that. Perhaps I should have been more careful.

I don't want to be too careful, though, or I'll end up locking myself in a giant underground temple and calling myself Iban.

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There it is. Sorry to disappoint anybody if you were hoping for a new story. =p

24-Apr-2010 06:19:08 - Last edited on 24-Apr-2010 06:25:17 by Logan Shafts

Eri Vi
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Don't have any time at the moment, but I'm saving this post to comment on what I'm sure is another amazing story. :P

EDIT: Oh I see, it's the AOG one, well I don't think I've read the whole thing yet. I'll comment soon. Got to go...

EDIT: So, read it. Definitely enjoyed it. I love how it's both so serious and comical.

There was only one line I couldn't make sense of:
"Hellhounds ran patrolled the mountain edges, teasing our flanks."
Just checking if that's what it's meant to be.

24-Apr-2010 10:23:31 - Last edited on 24-Apr-2010 14:18:23 by Eri Vi

Englishkid62

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Wow.

I play only classical piano pieces, because I really don't like jazz, or heavy metal/rap etc.

In fact, Nylon guitar is about the only type of guitar I liked O_o

But yeah, I love pieces such as Cavatina - a lovely piece!

And I do take lessons - to be precise, I'm studying in a music college :|

And you do take lessons too?

P.S. Chapter 3 is still my favourite.

24-Apr-2010 14:05:06 - Last edited on 24-Apr-2010 21:33:14 by Englishkid62

Logan Shafts
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Malevolent:

Sorry to disappoint, that was just a re-post of the old story because I don't want to keep bumping my AoG stories thread.

Thanks for pointing that out. I had written "ran" and then replaced it with "patrolled" but I forgot to delete "ran" I guess. O.o Thanks.

English:

=D Cool. I kind of like some jazz, only specific types though. And no heavy metal or rap.

My Nylon string is my favorite. If you want to see the style I try to play look up Antoine Dufour on YouTube (A song called "Spiritual Groove with Tommy Gauthier to be more precise).

That’s why I say alternative classical - he changes tempo regularly which is not a very classical thing to do. Even so, his music is my favorite - though I am not quite as good as him lol...

I've never heard Cavantina - but I may look it up. =D

Musical college sounds fun. I aspire to go to college for writing, and take musical courses on the side. But I guess that depends on my test scores! xD

I never took lessons, I taught myself guitar and flute (and a little piano, though that is a mockery to real piano players, lol). Mainly I learned the Tabbing system and then began learning ordinary songs, and then I started writing my own stuff. =p

24-Apr-2010 20:39:00 - Last edited on 24-Apr-2010 20:52:36 by Logan Shafts

Englishkid62

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Well, heavy metal/rap mostly to me are incoherent noises O_o

I looked up the video. The sound colour is certainly interesting, combining the rich tone of the violin and slapping the strings on the guitar. I suppose the exotic 'alternative classical' colour was prescribed by the G Aeolian mode around which this piece is set in. Actually, I think it rarely modulated O_o . But that was a cool combination.

Classical music has many forms, although I am no real authority on this, but I can assure you that a lot of classical music since the 19th century changes tempo and pulls the speed around for effects.

(Actually, the piece above didn't change speed at all...?)

You've never heard of Cavatina by Stanley Myer? O_o

Music college is fun?! Maybe, lol, but hours of practising a day for sure. Oh, and the music essays...

Taught yourself using those manuals? :P Yeah, some people do that and that's really fine lol. My cousin taught himself also, obviously not wanting to pay >.< But yeah, sounds great :)

You compose too? Would love to hear them. Speaking of which, I think I actually have some compositions of mine on Youtube, somewhere lol.

24-Apr-2010 21:29:53 - Last edited on 24-Apr-2010 21:33:04 by Englishkid62

Logan Shafts
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Same.

That's only one of the examples. I picked one that I thought you'd like more - because it is more 'regular'. If you explore his other songs though (atleast the ones I have on CD), many of them have very strange tempo's.

I'm not a master of music, in fact I can't read music - and I don't know scales. So talking about "G Aeolian" is meaningless to me, other than that I think it is a scale. Sorry. =/

Well I'm glad. I always say "alternative classical" because I've never been sure about what is 'classified' as 'classical', lol.

I looked it up. Loved it, very good. ^^

I practice for hours everyday as it is - and I love it. Musical essays on the other hand...no idea, but they don't sound fun. =/

Not using manuals, I just googled tabs for different songs and learned them. Then once I got a few songs, I started writing.

I compose a LOT, but only about half of the stuff I write is really 'acceptable' by my standards. Half of it's just random tunes that I come up with while I'm whistling (something I do regularly - to the dismay of my roomates, lol).

If you find links to your stuff, I'd be happy to check them out. I don't post anything I have online (as of yet), because I have no recording device.

25-Apr-2010 06:29:43

Englishkid62

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I actually went on to a few other videos and tapped my hands through them lol. Still quite regular in my opinion, although he does pull them tempo a little and there are places it felt as though it had an extra beat in the bar, making the time signature irregular. That, and the usual syncopation in his pieces make the pieces quite special :)

Heh, I'm not a master either, an undergraduate perhaps lol. G Aeolian is not a scale, it is a mode :P . A mode by definition defies all attempt to classify them as a traditional scale because they do not base on any one note. What I said was basically Aeolian mode starting on G. It can't be called a scale as such. Ah well lol.

I know. Some people call 60s music classics, whereas they're not really classical music. Just like in writing - what is classified as literature? But my poor definition for it as the Western music (Europe) written in year 1400 - 1940-ish lol!

Maybe you can learn Cavatina and play it!

Music essays often require you to read music and analyse them lol. Not as hard as English essays because you keep your opinions to yourself generally, and you're talking about facts. I was asked (in fact, made) to write a 1000 word essay on two symphonies written in Vienna in between 1750 - 1810 and compare their stylistic differences. 1000 words is nowhere near enough but I have to get it done :|

Oh! The rest of us here have to learn to read music! :O (And no tabs)

What kind of things do you write? Only 3 pieces to me are acceptable now lol. The rest would be ripped apart by First study composers who have too much time on their hands and generally being snobbish. I probably have broken some rules and let slip a few parallel fifths and octaves, the otherwise 'grammar' of music - but who cares! :D

You whistle too? I can't whistle at all! But if they're tunes you liked and wrote down, maybe like me you're all for tunes? :P

25-Apr-2010 11:36:00 - Last edited on 25-Apr-2010 11:37:55 by Englishkid62

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Oh, I think if you search my name there, you'll find a piece called 'Unrequited MIDI' - I didn't play it, the computer did, but it's one of the three I'm proud of lol.

Lastly, I think you'll find a lot of us are musicians here in the story forums, and there were more than I thought!

P.S. Are you writing/working on any new story at the moment? And sorry for the very long reply.

25-Apr-2010 11:36:13 - Last edited on 25-Apr-2010 11:38:40 by Englishkid62

Logan Shafts
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Ah. Well if you like his music, look up "Trilogy" that’s pretty much my favorite of his songs. Also, you might check out Andy McKee, who is much the same style (check out his song "Rylynn&quot ;) .

I see. I know nothing of 'modes' or anything. I play by ear, not by any correct form. =/ I've been told repeatedly that I have perfect pitch - but once again I don't really know what that means other than that I assume people like my music (since they come back to listen more), lol.

I can't really put a definition on Classical music. It's just a style, I guess it has to do with the way your music is expressed. For instance, in rock music it is generally 'harder' and more aggressive. Classical is usually softer (though some composers might argue that), and more sequential rather than simply hitting random notes really fast...Lol.

Maybe. But I've been busy - I'm in the middle of writing a song which is my attempt at merging styles. I've been trying to write it with country (hick) tunes as well as Spanish style classical, my own style, and a slight jazz theme. So far...It's a mess. But the parts are good at least, I just have to write areas between them to put them together smoothly. =p

I guess I'll have to learn to read music if I go to college for music theory. To be honest it sounds horrid, from the way you describe that essay...Lol. But I guess we'll see how that works out. x.x

The first song I had was written in a dream - which sounds weird, but its true. I had been teaching myself chords and such, and practicing finger picking, when one night I had a dream about a blossom falling off of a tree (It sounds weird but it was cool in the dream, if you know what I mean).

25-Apr-2010 20:01:50

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