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<Two Years Earlier...>

Ermine paused.

She stood at the threshold between life and death. Peace and war. She stood on the blanket of ash and blood, and looked beyond at a land where people slept with both eyes closed.

She was hesitating.

~You must.~

“I know,” she muttered.

~It is necessary.~

“I know.”

~It will bring a better day for both of us. We must go to this “Grand Exchange” you've told me of and find men who can help me.~

“I know.” Ermine stroked the orb. “I'm going to do my best. I just...” She eyed the other side of the wall with fear.

It was, unfortunately for her, a busy day in Edgeville. A band of merchants had just arrived from Rellekka, and folk were hurrying toward the town square to look at the 'exotic' goods.

She didn't know that, of course. All she knew was that there were a lot of people to get through to help her new friend.

~It will be good for you. You should be with your kind while you can.~

Ermine nodded mutely, not quite registering what he said. She took a deep breath, a step forward...

...and hopped over the wall.

She paused to collect herself. Skirting around the edges of civilization, she made her way to the river Lum.

~Do not worry, Ermine. We will be safe in Varrock. I promise you.~


There was a long silence in the caverns. Sir Apiro tried and failed to appreciate it.

“You...” Sir Kamvent hissed. *Old...crazy...gah!” He took a deep breath.

Sir Apiro winced, predicting a rant—a shouted rant—to ensue. But Kamvent spoke quietly. “That did not have ANY relevance, AT ALL, to my question. That was basic chinchomping HISTORY.”

Urhney shrugged. “Deny it all you want...”

“I'm not--*

Captain Vility nodded. “Sir Kamvent is right, actually. That wasn't relevant.”

“It was, if you consider the subtext.”

The captain raised an eyebrow. “Really.”

“Oh, yes. You see...”

Sir Apiro waved his knife between the two. “Look. I do not CARE. Just shut up and let me concentrate on getting us out of here.”

21-Aug-2011 17:39:03

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Sir Kamvent watched the Kinshra's face go from angry to confused to afraid. “Apiro..?”

“Sir Apiro. The, erm...” Apiro ran his fingers through his red hair. “I think we took a wrong turn.”

“A wrong—APIRO! We do NOT have time to get lost!”

“SIR Apiro. Now, calm down. We aren't lost. I know exactly where we are.” He turned and appeared to examine the other knights.

*What are you doing?” Captain Vility asked.

“Head count. Unless I'm much mistaken, we somehow managed to get into the heart of the Dorgeshuun tunnels without ANYBODY dying.”

“That's good, right?” Vility frowned.

“Well, it means we're very lucky. The traps must have somehow not been activated, or maybe we happened to take the right route by mistake and avoided them altogether. But now I don't know how to get out. I don't think we can count on the same luck twice.”

“So what do we do?” Kamvent asked.

“We improvise.” Sir Apiro looked at Captain Vility, his face a curious mixture of grim and amused. “You probably won't like it, though.”
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21-Aug-2011 17:39:55

YuBiusk Ink

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Thanks, Yam and Snowbuster.

Honestly, I'm probably never gonna continue this--Stories subforum just ain't what it used to be (even when I was around, it was still kicking a bit) and I'd have to go back and "for srs" edit this stuff, since it's way below my standards nowadays.

Still, I don't know if I have a backup, so I'd like to keep it alive. It's basically the first time I tried writing "emotional" stuff, however slightly.

25-Feb-2013 02:23:12

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Honestly, I have a soft spot for this story. It's one of the first times I really tried to write a female character, and big surprise, I ended up connecting to her closer than I'd ever done with a male character. Poor Ermine. She's so screwed.

23-Aug-2022 04:27:31

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