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It's funny how I always find your stuff first.
You continue to amaze me with Tempest upon High; you aren't matched.

25-Oct-2007 01:26:31 - Last edited on 25-Oct-2007 01:27:25 by [#O4EM1GWQQ]

Hey Torpeh. I'll definitely be reading.

25-Oct-2007 01:37:46

25-Oct-2007 01:40:42

nice i see you use Poetic Devices!!! bumpo

25-Oct-2007 01:41:43

Do we even need to talk about it?

25-Oct-2007 01:48:11

I think we just did.

25-Oct-2007 01:52:33

Heh, thanks, guys.
If anyone can spot the rhyme scheme for 'Tempest Upon High', he gets... a cookie?

-- Torpeh.

25-Oct-2007 12:47:11

25-Oct-2007 13:01:47

Here is my *attempt* at spotting the rhyme scheme.
a
b
c
d
e
c
(f)
(g)
c
h
h
c
i
c
c
j
k
c
l
m
c
n
o
c
p
p
c
q
q
c
It's probably 100% incorrect, but I was the first to try!

25-Oct-2007 23:49:27 - Last edited on 25-Oct-2007 23:51:04 by [#WPO3NUGNZ]

Heh. It's a bit more subtle and a bit more simple than that.
EDIT: I'll tell you. The second-to-last syllables of the first two lines of every stanza rhyme. The second-to-last syllables of the fourth and fifth lines of each stanza rhyme, too. The obvious one is the recurring-sound rhyme on the third and sixth lines.

-- Torpeh.

26-Oct-2007 00:07:03 - Last edited on 26-Oct-2007 00:38:31 by [#85QZ2X6LC]