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Yippee!

25-Nov-2007 21:33:54

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New add on page 1.

-- Torpeh.

25-Nov-2007 22:21:27

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'Tis good. Your dialogue is always believable, unlike many stories here.

25-Nov-2007 22:38:54

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Thanks a lot. I was worried about the dialogue, so that's good to hear.

-- Torpeh.

25-Nov-2007 22:46:23

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Hmm.
I don't think that scene's very well planned at all, so I'm going to have a think about it overnight and rewrite tomorrow.

-- Torpeh.

25-Nov-2007 22:56:32

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I guess you're right. It was kind of an awkward situation how that woman knocked the other one out and all.

26-Nov-2007 23:21:29

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Partly that, and partly because the scene wasn't really going anywhere.

-- Torpeh.

27-Nov-2007 19:26:41

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*Bows.*
Master! Teach me of your all knowing poetry knowledge!
*Kisses feet.*

07-Dec-2007 22:16:02

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Lol. XD
Seriousleh?

-- Torpeh.

09-Dec-2007 13:56:20

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XD It's really hard to teach poetry. It's too much of an art.

09-Dec-2007 23:35:53

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