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Hello fellow story readers and tellers! Welcome to The World in Flames, this is my...first, second, third story, I think. I don't know, one of those but anyways. I hope you enjoy, comment if you could, good or bad or anything that I could improve on. If you would, please follow my rules and do not break them. Also, please note. This is my own fantasy story of The God Wars. None of this follows the story of the real God Wars. Just bear this in mind.
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Bio created by Ark Von Doom - Page 4
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Bio created by Spain464 - Page 5
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Bio created by Kitties Rule - Page 6
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Bio created by Lupon5 - Page 28
Character Profiles - Page 1
Story - Page 1
Prologue - Page 2
Chapter 1: Homecoming - Page 2
Chapter 2: Into Zamorak's Flame - Page 2
Chapter 3: Lighting and Fire, The Clash Between Good and Evil Begins! - Page 3
Chapter 4: Alfred's Hatred - Page 3
Chapter 5: The Staff of Alrous - Page 4
Chapter 6: The Knightly Battle - Page 5
Chapter 7: Tears of Sadness and Madness - Page 6
Chapter 8: The Flow - Page 7
Chapter 9: One Step Forward - Page 9
Chapter 10: Choice - Page 10
Chapter 11: Walking Down Another Path - Page 11
Chapter 12: The Army of the Altais - Page 12
Chapter 13: Walking the Trail of Truth - Page 14
Chapter 14: Fury of a Traitor - Page 16-17
Chapter 15: The Pain Continues to Grow - Page 19-20
Chapter 16: The Clouded Tops - Page 24
Chapter 17: Dante's Future and Past - Page 27
Chapter 18: Spread Out - Page 29
Chapter 19: Crimson Snow Part 1 - Page 31
Chapter 20: Crimson Snow Part 2 - Page 36-37
Chapter 21: The Past Days of a Lost Life - Page 38
Epilogue of Part 1 - Page 42-43
Credits - Page 43
My Favorite Comments - Page 43
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Seperadith created by Seph
Reid created by Spain464
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Arad created by Kitties Rule
Sarah created by Akylas
General Mercutio Valadrian by Ark Von Doom
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Final Chapter - achieved on Page 42
Winning Akylas's Writer of the Week award
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##= Character Profiles =## (A few spoilers down below, watch out!)
Name: Dante Bellerophon
Race: Human
Age: 19
Birth Date: Unknown
Gender: Male
Weapons:
Prologue - Chapter 10: A Rune 2h that he carries with one hand.
Chapter 11- : The Staff of Alrous and A Rune 2h Sword
Appearance: About 6'3 feet tall, He has black long hair, and he has green eyes, he wears a steel platebody and platelegs, he wears a blue cape and green gloves, he wears leather boots.
Personality: He has a brave, tough, calm personality. Keeping his thoughts and feelings towards himself and never shares them. Even seeing someone he hates, he doesn't change in emotion. Normally, when there's a person to protect, he guards them with his life.
Family: He has no memories of his childhood or of growing up, therefore, he can't remember his family or parents.
First Appearance: Prologue
Name: Stephanie Apollo
Race: Human
Age: 19
Birth Date: May 10th
Gender: Female
Weapon: A Magic Bow with steel arrows.
Appearance: About 5'6 feet tall, She has long brown hair, she has blue eyes, and wears a emerald necklace (given from her mother before she left) and full blue dragonhide (no coif), and leather boots.
Personality: She is kind, friendly, easy going, and strong. She tends to push Dante a little bit. But ultimately, she acts extra nicer around Dante.
Family:
Father: Murdered by Zamorak's forces
Mother: Long been missing
Any other Family: Dead or missing.
First Appearance: Prologue
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Name: Frederick Aether
Race: Human
Age: 22
Birth Date: February 9th
Gender: Male
Weapon: A air staff and runes
Appearance: About 6'7 feet tall, He has white short hair with two bangs, one that covers his left eye that is covered with a eye patch and other one that's near his right eye. He has purple eyes, He wears a blue robe top and two metal wristbands and a golden ring (his family heirloom) he wears green long pants and wizard boots.
Personality: He is a kind, friendly, softhearted, helpful, very respectful, and very forgiving personality. He hates war and battling, but he fights to end the suffering of his family.He also hates those that refuse to help others, he tends to act calm and strong around Dante.
Family:
Mother: Died on his 6th birthday
Father: Alive.
Brother: Been missing for as far as Frederick can remember.
Any other family is either died or alive.
First Appearance: Prologue
Name: Alfred Aether
Race: Human
Age: 21
Birth Date: June 19th
Gender: Male
Weapon: Dragon Longsword
Appearance: About 6'5 feet tall, he has sliver short hair with two bangs, one that covers his left eye and other one that's near his right eye, He has Crimson red eyes, he wears a Zamorak Platebody and Platelegs, he wears red gloves and blue boots.
Personality: He has a strong, revengeful, evil, ruthless, hateful personality. He hates Frederick with all his hatred because he got all the love and attention while Alfred was the outcast. He serves Zamorak and treats Zamorak like his father.
Family:
Mother: Dead
Father: Alive, but he shuns and hates Alfred
Brother: Frederick
Any other family is either died or alive.
First Appearance: Chapter 2: Into Zamorak's Flame
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Name: Ivan Abderus
Race: Elf
Age: 13
Birth Date: September 22th
Gender: Male
Weapons:
Chapters 5-10: Staff of Alrous
Chapters 11-19 : A Staff of Air with runes
Appearance: About 5'5 feet tall, he has dark blue long curtains and has bronze brown eyes. He has a tan short sleeved shirt and wears a necklace with his family crest on the pendant. He wears dark gray pants and black shoes.
Personality: He has a kind, thoughtful, helpful, self doubtful, low self esteem personality. The reason he doubts himself is because he failed to protect his little sister and brother during a massacre of his village when he was 11 years old.
Family:
His whole family: Murdered by Zamorak's army
First Appearance: Chapter 5: The Staff of Alrous
Last Appearance: Chapter 19: Crimson Snow Part 1
Name: Enyo Dike
Race: Human
Age: 18
Birth Date: Unknown
Gender: Female
Weapon: A Steel 2h Sword
Appearance: About 5' 7 feet tall, she has sliver long hair and has white eyes (She's blind), she wears steel platebody and plateskirt and a unholy symbol, she wears a red cape, red gloves, and red boots.
Personality: She has a rough, respectful, focused, strong, evil personality. Like Dante, she keeps her thoughts and feelings towards herself and never shares them. Even seeing someone she hates, she doesn't change in emotion. She's willing to charge into enemy grounds without a second thought.
Family: Also like Dante, she has no memories of her childhood or of growing up, therefore, she can't remember her family or parents.
First Appearance: Chapter 5: The Staff of Alrous
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## - Story - ##
During the First Age, when the world of Runescape was young, the three legendary gods, Saradomin, Zamorak, and Guthix created this world and everything in it. All was at peace until the Third Age, Zamorak and his warriors destroyed this peaceful world with his ambition to create the world in his very own vision.
Three years have passed since the beginning of The God Wars, a man armed with his Rune longsword, dreams of a world in which it was like in the beginning. This man would become a legend, many called "The Shining Savior". This man's name was Teseus. He lead an rebel army of 11,000 to war but during a great battle between Zamorak's army and his army, the legendary warrior fell at the hands of Zaros. Ultimately, his rebel army were all overpowered and killed by the mightier army of Zamorak. Before the ruins and corpses of the once beloved and famous rebel army, it rained and Zaros laughed as if he destroyed a great threat to Zamorak's victory of the God Wars. With the rebel army and all other God's armies all wounded from pervious wars, Zamorak had perfect chance to claim victory in this war and become Supreme God of all that exists and lives. But, at Zamorak's surprise, Saradomin's army ambushed his kingdom and attacked with all his fury. This battle ended in a draw with hundreds of their knights killed.
3,900 years have passed since that day, a new army rises to end this war. This army is lead by Dante Bellerophon, he leads his army to end The God Wars and forever finish the battle and suffering of the people around him. He and his friends, Frederick Aether, a 21 year old magic user and Stephanie Apollo, a 19 year old ranger. These three will try to lead this army to victory.
But in these dark and shallow days, can a light cut though the darkness so salvation can be restored?
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