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Technically, I'm not the greatest reviewer (in fact, I haven't even reviewed a story).

But...I'll see what I can do, what is your story's title?
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16-Sep-2008 14:26:19 - Last edited on 05-Nov-2014 14:06:33 by Serene End

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-}} Chapter 12: The Army of the Altais {{-

Dante walks north towards The Army of the Altais' Kingdom. The winds of the blizzard roars west, the air became more colder with every step Dante took. "It shouldn't be that longer now, we should be there in about 2 miles." Alrous said. "Understood." Dante heard. The snow was about 2 feet, and with every footstep a crunching sound is made. "Does this weather not affect you, Dante?" Alrous asked. "No, nothing affects me." Dante replied. The castle can be seen though the thickening conditions of the blizzard. Dante walks into the castle, the main gate closes. "Welcome Dante, to the Castle of the Altais." Alrous welcomed. "Hmmm..nice place you got here." Dante complimented. Dante walks a few feet from where he was standing, the temperature goes from bitter cold to about 75 degrees. A hooded person walks up to Dante.

"So...you are the hero we've been searching for...Dante Bellerophon..." The hooded person said with a very soft and quiet voice.

"Yes, I am Dante Bellerophon, and who might you be?" Dante asked

"I have no name, I am merely a being who was born to protect the balance of the world."

"So, Alrous. We're now on Guthix's side?"

"Yes, you see. I was created by Guthix just in case the world would go unbalanced, just like how it has now. We needed you to help us because you weren't going to stop Zamorak or Saradomin by the army you were in." Alrous stated

"I understand."

Meanwhile, back at the Rebel's Castle. It's 10:00 AM, everyone is awake and aware of Dante's betrayal. Seperadith, Reid, and Jikvald are talking about this topic, and discuss their next action. Ivan walks outside and looks at the sky, and Frederick talks to Stephanie to try to get her mind off the fact that Dante is their enemy. After an hour, Seperadith, Reid, and Jikvald walk in the middle of the main room with everyone inside.

"Listen everyone, we have a plan." Seperadith said

"Let me guess, we're going after Dante." Frederick said
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18-Sep-2008 14:51:07

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"You're pretty good Frederick." Reid said

"We'll be heading out tomorrow, so make sure that tonight, you are prepare for anything, and I mean anything." Jikvald stated

"Gotcha." Frederick said

"Yep." Ivan said

"Stephanie,. are you alright?" Frederick asked

"...Y-Yeah...." Stephanie said with an upset tone of voice.

"I would suggest we get prepare in a matter of hours." Jikvald said

Back with Dante, he begins to hear strange noises coming from outside, it was a bunch of bandits wanting revenge against Dante for killing their comrades. "Burn this castle to the ground!" One bandit yelled. Dante sits up from his chair and walks to the top of the castle and looks at all the bandits with pity. "Heh...this will be a good warm up." Dante said. "There he is! Kill him!" A bandit yelled. Dante holds The Staff of Alrous up, 10 of bandits throw Bronze axes at Dante but before they hit him, they stop and are thrown back at the throwers and impale them all in the head. Screams of agony and pain fill the air and blood spills everywhere! Some of the bandits are shaken down in fear and run for their lives but Dante begins to control them and stops them from running. "You weren't running from me, were you?" Dante asked. all the bandit that are being controlled stab themselves in the left shoulder and they all cried in pain.

"Now you must die for your foolishness." Dante said. Dante controls the bandits to stab their left leg and he controls spikes of ice to impale all of the controlled bandits, the bandits begin to struggle but they know that their all going to die. All the spikes of ice impale all the controlled bandits, Dante smiles with pleasure. "What the hell are you!!?" A bandit screamed. "The one and only true power of this world and you are the fools that must be punished for your sins." Dante replied. Dante begins to grow orange and floats in the air, he holds his left arm out in-front of him.
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18-Sep-2008 14:56:28

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"Goodbye worthless sinners, Spears of Retribution!" Dante yelled. Thousands of Spears of ice rise from the ground and kill all that stand in it's way and stretches on for miles. In the aftermath, blood and bodies cover the area with no man left standing or breathing. Dante gently lands back onto the ground. "How foolish humans can be." Dante said as he walked back into the castle. Meanwhile, back at the Rebel's Castle. It's 9:00 PM and everyone finishes up preparing for their confront with Dante. After a few minutes, everyone is done and heads to bed, when the morning sun rises. Everyone gathers their stuff and walks into the main room with Seperadith, Reid, and Jikvald waiting.

"Alright, everyone here?" Reid asked.

"Yep, let's go." Ivan said.

"Okay, everyone follow Jikvald." Seperadith said

Everyone follows Jikvald, Frederick looks over to Stephanie still seeing her upset. He walks over to her. "You alright Stephanie?" Frederick asked. "Huh? Ummmmm...yeah fine." Stephanie said "Well um okay.." Frederick said. Ravinius hides behind a tree and watches all of them heading towards the north.

"Hmmm...wonder where their heading. Lord Zamorak, should I follow them?" Ravinius asked.

"You may." Zamorak replied.

"Understood, I'll follow them."

"Very well."

The End of Chapter 12
Next Chapter,
Chapter 13: Walking the Trail of Truth

Thank you for reading, I appreciate it ^_^ .
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18-Sep-2008 15:01:16

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Vengence,may it be served soon,or is it as far from accomplishment than ever?Will Salvation be delivered?Will the death of those killed Mercylessly be avenged?And will it be an arrow,magyk,or Sword to spill the blood of the evil?May Salvation be delivered,unto the utmost to those who weep!May glorious battle unfold,and flames burn-flames of friendship,,flames of the long lost,flames of revenge,flames of evil,flames of glory!And may those who provoke it fight to the death for their rights,for it is only human to do so.But human decisions shape the world in any way we want-warlike,peace, it is only human!And so we must do our best for this world to contribute,for if not,the World will soon Stand in Flames!


Death is only rebirth... "How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

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