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I enjoyed both Scab Chapters thanks, and may I direct you all to Page 1 Post 6
I will be writting a Chapter later today
I will be writting a Chapter later today
05-Dec-2010 17:34:10
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If you want inspiration just ask me, I'm good at that kind of stuff.
I read other stories for inspiration, this story has helped MY story alot!
05-Dec-2010 17:49:29 - Last edited on 05-Dec-2010 17:59:39 by Darkrose826
Thanks, both for the offer (started reading it already, it's good
), and for the completment
. Here is the chapter!
), and for the completment
. Here is the chapter!
05-Dec-2010 22:54:09
Chapter 15a – The Office
(Geo is leading Nooby towards Puttoc’s office)
Nooby – Follow the leader leader leader, follow the leader!
Geo – Nooby, there has just been an attack! Shouldn’t you be a little more serious?
Nooby – Yes, like wondering where Ricky Gervais is…
Geo * I meant more like trying to come up with an explanation for Puttoc, his office is just up that staircase, it’s your first door that you see.
Nooby – Is it on the left or right?
Geo – There is only one door.
Nooby – Wait, is that my left or your left?
Geo – Why would it be my left?! Puttoc is the one that’s up there!
Nooby – So it’s his left?
Geo – It’s nobodys left! There is one door!
Nooby – One door? But you said that it was on my right
Geo – It’s not on your right, IT’S ON YOUR LEFT!!! Wait, no! There is no right or left!!
Nooby – But I’m right handed… does this mean I’m no handed? AHHH! I HAVE NO HANDS!!!
Geo – Just go!
Nooby – Could you show me?
Geo – But then I’d have to go upstairs, and there isn’t the room…
Nooby – Fine, I think I can manage.
Geo – No, it’s okay, I can show you.
Nooby – Naw, it’s fine.
Geo – No, I want to show you.
Nooby – No.
Geo – Yes! NOW FOLLOW ME UP THESE STAIRS!!!
Nooby – Whatever you say
(They go up the stairs, and Nooby walks into Puttoc’s office, Nooby can see many strange things, a bird, books, and the…)
Nooby – SORTING CAPE!
(Lightning and Dramatic Music)
(Nooby Puts the Cape on)
Nooby – Hiya Sorting Cape
(Lightning and Dramatic Music)
Cape – Not you again
Nooby – People say that to me a lot, is it some form of greeting?
Cape – Yes…
Nooby * That makes sense, Imagine people not liking me?
Cape – I know. Impossible.
Nooby – So how is show business working out for you?
Cape – Not very good, I was going to go to an audition, but then I remembered I’m a cape and can’t walk
Nooby – Tough look.
Cape – It’s nice to finally have someone to talk to-
Nooby –Oooh! Birdy! (He throws of the cape)
(Geo is leading Nooby towards Puttoc’s office)
Nooby – Follow the leader leader leader, follow the leader!
Geo – Nooby, there has just been an attack! Shouldn’t you be a little more serious?
Nooby – Yes, like wondering where Ricky Gervais is…
Geo * I meant more like trying to come up with an explanation for Puttoc, his office is just up that staircase, it’s your first door that you see.
Nooby – Is it on the left or right?
Geo – There is only one door.
Nooby – Wait, is that my left or your left?
Geo – Why would it be my left?! Puttoc is the one that’s up there!
Nooby – So it’s his left?
Geo – It’s nobodys left! There is one door!
Nooby – One door? But you said that it was on my right
Geo – It’s not on your right, IT’S ON YOUR LEFT!!! Wait, no! There is no right or left!!
Nooby – But I’m right handed… does this mean I’m no handed? AHHH! I HAVE NO HANDS!!!
Geo – Just go!
Nooby – Could you show me?
Geo – But then I’d have to go upstairs, and there isn’t the room…
Nooby – Fine, I think I can manage.
Geo – No, it’s okay, I can show you.
Nooby – Naw, it’s fine.
Geo – No, I want to show you.
Nooby – No.
Geo – Yes! NOW FOLLOW ME UP THESE STAIRS!!!
Nooby – Whatever you say
(They go up the stairs, and Nooby walks into Puttoc’s office, Nooby can see many strange things, a bird, books, and the…)
Nooby – SORTING CAPE!
(Lightning and Dramatic Music)
(Nooby Puts the Cape on)
Nooby – Hiya Sorting Cape
(Lightning and Dramatic Music)
Cape – Not you again
Nooby – People say that to me a lot, is it some form of greeting?
Cape – Yes…
Nooby * That makes sense, Imagine people not liking me?
Cape – I know. Impossible.
Nooby – So how is show business working out for you?
Cape – Not very good, I was going to go to an audition, but then I remembered I’m a cape and can’t walk
Nooby – Tough look.
Cape – It’s nice to finally have someone to talk to-
Nooby –Oooh! Birdy! (He throws of the cape)
05-Dec-2010 22:55:00 - Last edited on 14-Dec-2010 22:41:10 by Snakus Viper
Chapter 15b - The Office
Nooby – Hiya Birdy!... Not a talker eh?... :/… Talk… Please… Come-on…. Polly want a cracker?... Do you have a cracker?... Can I have a cracker?... UGH! You don’t have cracker! I don’t have a cracker! Why don’t you just lie down and die! (The bird bursts into flames)
Nooby – I said lie down, not spontaneously combust :/
(Puttoc walks in)
Nooby – Not you again
Puttoc – Beg your pardon?
Nooby – Well sir, I just killed your bird. Wait, that did*’t come out right.
Puttoc – YOU KILLED HIM? Are you sure he’s not just resting?
Nooby – No he’s dead.
Puttoc – He could just be pinin’ for the forest
Nooby – No. He’s dead. This bird is gone, past away, kicked the bucket, if you’d have buried it it would be pushing up daisies! This, is an ex-parrot.
Puttoc – No Nooby, it’s not a parrot, it’s a Phoenix, look, it’s being born again.
(It is being born again)
Puttoc – My precious Spoons
Anyway, back to why you’re really here.
Nooby – Ah yes, that matter. I’m here to complain about your tour guide. He point blank refused to take me up here when I insisted on it.
Puttoc – What? I mean the attack!
Nooby – Oh Yeah
Puttoc – Now, I don’t believe that you did it, but is there anything you want to tell me?
Nooby – Well, you see I*** got this rash-
Puttoc – About the attacks.
Nooby’s mind – Well, I may be a descendent of the dark lord who wants to kill me, talk about family feuds, I should probably tell Puttoc*
Nooby – Nope
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Nooby – Hiya Birdy!... Not a talker eh?... :/… Talk… Please… Come-on…. Polly want a cracker?... Do you have a cracker?... Can I have a cracker?... UGH! You don’t have cracker! I don’t have a cracker! Why don’t you just lie down and die! (The bird bursts into flames)
Nooby – I said lie down, not spontaneously combust :/
(Puttoc walks in)
Nooby – Not you again
Puttoc – Beg your pardon?
Nooby – Well sir, I just killed your bird. Wait, that did*’t come out right.
Puttoc – YOU KILLED HIM? Are you sure he’s not just resting?
Nooby – No he’s dead.
Puttoc – He could just be pinin’ for the forest
Nooby – No. He’s dead. This bird is gone, past away, kicked the bucket, if you’d have buried it it would be pushing up daisies! This, is an ex-parrot.
Puttoc – No Nooby, it’s not a parrot, it’s a Phoenix, look, it’s being born again.
(It is being born again)
Puttoc – My precious Spoons
Anyway, back to why you’re really here.
Nooby – Ah yes, that matter. I’m here to complain about your tour guide. He point blank refused to take me up here when I insisted on it.
Puttoc – What? I mean the attack!
Nooby – Oh Yeah
Puttoc – Now, I don’t believe that you did it, but is there anything you want to tell me?
Nooby – Well, you see I*** got this rash-
Puttoc – About the attacks.
Nooby’s mind – Well, I may be a descendent of the dark lord who wants to kill me, talk about family feuds, I should probably tell Puttoc*
Nooby – Nope
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Hope you liked it
Find out what happens next, on Nooby and the City of Secrets
05-Dec-2010 22:56:56 - Last edited on 14-Dec-2010 22:41:21 by Snakus Viper
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