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Levente

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“Shadow's secret. Legends foretell of a place where all the causes are made. Causes like the Shadow Seekers, or the Birth of Man. Each had a different aspect of why and how they were made, each with their own tale and their own demise. It's a book of secrets that has always weaved into man's darkest dreams.”
“And the girl? How does she fit in?”
“She is the map.” replied the Father. “And she is the key. Her blood is a holy fluid that flows through this earth once, ever thousand years. There has been records of a special girl like her in the past, a girl that could postpone the one we fear. The girl to resurrect the ones we love, the girl the end everything we hold dear.”
“Father, if I show you this girl can you help us?” asked Nathan, rubbing his chin.
“Sorry my child but I can not. In the name of the Holy Book, and in my name too.”
“Thank You, Father for your time. I shall have my leave.” Nathan said, as he picked up his crozier and walked out of the room. Nathan disappointment led him outside to Badger and back to Neiko place.
~ ~~
Upon reaching Neiko's house, Nathan saw a large apple tree just a good distance away, from the house, after he put Badger back into the stable. He picked an apple, and just sat there thinking about what he was going to do. The only thing that came to mind was to start Star's training but he had to decide where.
“Hi there, Nathan.” Nathan looked behind the apple tree and saw there Neiko looking ravishing. She had a short red dress on her, with feathers on the stop but right under her shoulder. He saw her bare white and smooth shoulder and knew that he desired her very greatly. Her long purplish hair hung down her body, and her pointed ear pocked through her hair. She carried an apple basket, and started to pick them before Nathan could reply.
“Hello there ... Neiko.” replied Nathan, dully. Though she was attractive, Nathan had to turn away from her, but he could not find a real reason why.

26-Aug-2009 06:31:10

Levente

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“Are you still frightened of me?” Neiko sang. She must be amusing herself, thought Nathan. But he dared not to speak. So she continued. “Come now Nathan. You witnessed more frightful than me, though I could tell you future, I can not see which road you shall pick when you come to it. I know where you went this morning and I know why your full of sorrow this lovely morning. But know this, there are more sparrows in three trees than in one.”
“I don't understand ...” replied Nathan, picking the grass at his feet.
“Why do you taunt your intelligence, Nathan. Fine for this sakes, I'll tell you that there is a man. He lives in the desert city of Dras' Vo*gin by the name of Kenta. An old historian that spent his rotten life in old smelly textbooks, reading the history of the crumbling city of Dras'\/orgin . He may help you, for a fee of course.” she smirked.
Nathan looked at Neiko with curiosity. “Why are you helping me?”
“That was my first intension when I first met you, but you were the one to flee from me.” Neiko laughed. She finished picking her apples and moved in front of Nathan. “And when you do write to my brother, tell him you met me. He will just surely die when he hears this. I haven't heard from him in nearly eight years ... Well when you have the time, or you would wish to risk it, come inside I'm making apple pie.” Neiko gave Nathan, a lovely smile that made Nathan's heart to jump and flutter with happiness then she left. Nathan's first thought was to go inside the house and eat some apple pie, but then he first had to figure out how he was going to go to Dras' ******. That city was leagues away, and would take at least a month to arrive there. Nathan sighed and finally decided that his best intention to go to Dras' ****** was to ask Neiko if she will lead them. Nathan finally decided that would ask tonight. Maybe Neiko's right, thought Nathan sighing, maybe apple pie would be good right now.

26-Aug-2009 06:31:27 - Last edited on 26-Aug-2009 06:44:45 by Levente

Levente

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I apologize that the desert city's name is starred out. The name of the city is called Dras '
Vo
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*said the Wind.
"Once I was a great general over the finest brigade, but now I'm long gone and blown away like the Northern Wind. May the storm return!"

26-Aug-2009 06:45:47 - Last edited on 26-Aug-2009 06:46:21 by Levente

Levente

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Please look for mistakes or any grammar problems in it and leave a post here. I will attend to it asap. Thx again
*said the Wind.
"Once I was a great general over the finest brigade, but now I'm long gone and blown away like the Northern Wind. May the storm return!"

26-Aug-2009 06:46:59

Levente

Levente

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thx alot. Usually when im fishing or wcing I write stuff like this. I would post some of my other stories but I dont think jagex would be too happy about the others. Ill give it a shot later, and Ill put a short story up for you guys to read.
btw ill put two more chapters tomorrow >.< soz, i am very busy so i just dont have alot of time and stuff.

*said the Wind.
"Once I was a great general over the finest brigade, but now I'm long gone and blown away like the Northern Wind. May the storm return!"

29-Aug-2009 01:57:08

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