Sorry guys, got real busy with school (god damn teachers giving me tons of Labs and Reports to write up...)
But no, I will not give up on this story. It is by far my greatest writing achievement to date; for those of you who are still with me, I thank you. The new adds WILL be up by Monday morning at the LATEST.
Dude that was NOT your best ability for writing. It was a block of text, but even though I read it, it still didn't manage to even a molecule of your capabilities.
I'm sorry, but you've got to fix that up!
Frodo --
Keep in mind that's writing from Mike's diary. He's not going to use huge words and eloquent sentences... he's a typical teenager!
Not to worry, the next posts, hopefully written tomorrow, will be up to my best ability, and will be written in 3rd person.
I used 1st person to explain what was going on in the 2 months I was absent