Here it is Part 10: YOU AGAIN!
Leon: A ladder...
Leon: a corner.... a guy in black robes...WAIT WHAT? AHHHH, Howed you get here so fast?
Merchant: I have a magical sock that can teleport me. Thats why i murdered my brother. he always wanted to teleport places.
Leon: ok then... got any first aid spray?
Merchant: Sure _gives first aid spray_
Leon: Thanks
Merchant: That will be 5000 Dollars Please.
Leon: What!!!!! NEVER LEON SCOTT KENNEDY PAYS FOR NOTHING _shoots merchant in nuts_
Merchant: X_X
Leon: MUAHAHAHAH, Now i should get out of here before his ghost haunted me...
(Leaves Room thingy)
Leon: There yay more doors _goes through_ OMG A SHACK, OMG A PATH.
Leon: _goes into shack_ YAY PISTOL AMMO, AND A HERB _Eats herb_
Leon: _Pukes_ Man i think i lost some health from that... _Leaves shack_ Time for path
Im gonna tell you this right now: The more funny stuff i put in it the shorter it gets k? See what happens next time on part 11: Mr.Boulder Doesnt Give Up.
11-Nov-2007 20:04:58
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16-Nov-2007 23:34:22
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the benis
Wow, 4/10, but thats just what we need, another Noob story spamming the forums, kicking down the storys that people write with a real storyline. Mediocre at best. It seems as a child wrote this, but it has Violence that isn't nessicary.
11-Nov-2007 21:50:44
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11-Nov-2007 21:52:02
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Mr Freeze127
this is awesome make another chapter XD
oh and back of mr.freeze you can have your oppinion on what to like personally i like this story and it does have a "storyline" it wouldn't be a story if it wasn't
and otherwise explain why it doesn't have one
EDIT: 99th post awesomness **
11-Nov-2007 22:18:41
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11-Nov-2007 22:19:01
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Severus