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Hello again; going through the bios.
“She was left running from city to city. But growing older and older, she read more and more books about the ways of magic. At the age of fifteen, she began creating a rune stone that could repel the disease. And so she created the stone two years later when she was about to turn seventeen.”
Hunh, a five-year-old could run from city to city and then get the education to read? I’m guessing there’s more to it later in the story.
“His armour's pauldrons are long, going down to about the beginning of his forearm.”
I’m guessing the pouldrons are articulated, but if they are that long, they would each be a manica instead of pouldron. Alena also would be wearing manicas rather than long pouldrons.
Well, your females really do tend to be short and often with bows. You see, yew longbows could have a draw weight of up to 140 pounds (or more). English knights on foot sometimes fired with such powerful bows. In this case, a powerful longbow would take a muscled two-hundred pound man to operate with efficiency. Plate armour was generally two millimetres thick, and a full suit weighed about sixty pounds, though I suppose if an armourer was to halve the thickness, you could get a much lighter version.
*tomatoes thrown at me*
Daniel Adlay bio, and then same issue on Lelia’s bio,
*The blade is about as thin as a blade of a katana.”
Historically, katanas were thick, heavy blades. The triangular cross-section certainly ended in an edge at the front, however the backside was thick, about one centimetre. Bangs covering eyes is a recurring appearance for many bios. Katanas with thin blades are a modern creation.
*more tomatoes thrown at me*
Alina’s spearheaded chain could also be a meteor hammer.
Some disappointed that there is not a bio wearing a plague doctor’s attire. How could you miss the epic beaked mask, wide-brimmed hat, long garment, long gloves, and awesome prodding stick?
“She was left running from city to city. But growing older and older, she read more and more books about the ways of magic. At the age of fifteen, she began creating a rune stone that could repel the disease. And so she created the stone two years later when she was about to turn seventeen.”
Hunh, a five-year-old could run from city to city and then get the education to read? I’m guessing there’s more to it later in the story.
“His armour's pauldrons are long, going down to about the beginning of his forearm.”
I’m guessing the pouldrons are articulated, but if they are that long, they would each be a manica instead of pouldron. Alena also would be wearing manicas rather than long pouldrons.
Well, your females really do tend to be short and often with bows. You see, yew longbows could have a draw weight of up to 140 pounds (or more). English knights on foot sometimes fired with such powerful bows. In this case, a powerful longbow would take a muscled two-hundred pound man to operate with efficiency. Plate armour was generally two millimetres thick, and a full suit weighed about sixty pounds, though I suppose if an armourer was to halve the thickness, you could get a much lighter version.
*tomatoes thrown at me*
Daniel Adlay bio, and then same issue on Lelia’s bio,
*The blade is about as thin as a blade of a katana.”
Historically, katanas were thick, heavy blades. The triangular cross-section certainly ended in an edge at the front, however the backside was thick, about one centimetre. Bangs covering eyes is a recurring appearance for many bios. Katanas with thin blades are a modern creation.
*more tomatoes thrown at me*
Alina’s spearheaded chain could also be a meteor hammer.
Some disappointed that there is not a bio wearing a plague doctor’s attire. How could you miss the epic beaked mask, wide-brimmed hat, long garment, long gloves, and awesome prodding stick?
03-Aug-2013 04:22:43
My apologizes for the time between your posting and mine. My family and I have moved to another house and we're just getting the internet back on. But I'm glad to come here to this... you're even saving the worst for last! xD
Anyway, allow me to extend my thanks once again for your time and effort. I truly do appreciate it. But to the roast!
Hmm, you're right about much of your criticisms towards the characters. Though I like the idea of a thin, katana sized blade! But if we're going to be realistic here, are most males not taller than most females? Heck, I rarely have a moment where I'm taller than a guy. I'm a pretty short person, I suppose... since I've been dubbed the "tree stump" jokingly by one of my family friends (who I prefer to call my brother.)
But that's getting off topic. Onward!
"Some disappointed that there is not a bio wearing a plague doctor’s attire. How could you miss the epic beaked mask, wide-brimmed hat, long garment, long gloves, and awesome prodding stick?
"
Ya know, now that you've mentioned it... I'm disappointed in myself too. xD Wide-brimmed hats is awesome, but the idea of that and the boss beaked mask. I could've had some super shady fellow who is on both sides -- how could I miss that!? OOOOOOHHHHH!
Well, the more I read, the more I'm glad to see I actually managed to get a laugh out of someone!
"“His left arm looked like the giant claw of werewolf, but it had the skin and look of a demon's claw.”
So does it look like the claw of a werewolf or of a demon? o.0"
IT'S DEFINITELY BOTH. I suppose I meant the overall appearance looked much like a claw of a demon... but it looks like a giant claw of a werewolf? *nervous laugh*
Yeah, I don't know... but anyway!
"*The blast bursts into an explosion”
Well, I’m pretty sure a blast is an explosion?"
DEFINITELY NOT. THOSE ARE TWO DIFFERENT THINGS! Erm, I don't know. xD Poor choice of wording, for sure.
Anyway, allow me to extend my thanks once again for your time and effort. I truly do appreciate it. But to the roast!
Hmm, you're right about much of your criticisms towards the characters. Though I like the idea of a thin, katana sized blade! But if we're going to be realistic here, are most males not taller than most females? Heck, I rarely have a moment where I'm taller than a guy. I'm a pretty short person, I suppose... since I've been dubbed the "tree stump" jokingly by one of my family friends (who I prefer to call my brother.)
But that's getting off topic. Onward!
"Some disappointed that there is not a bio wearing a plague doctor’s attire. How could you miss the epic beaked mask, wide-brimmed hat, long garment, long gloves, and awesome prodding stick?
"
Ya know, now that you've mentioned it... I'm disappointed in myself too. xD Wide-brimmed hats is awesome, but the idea of that and the boss beaked mask. I could've had some super shady fellow who is on both sides -- how could I miss that!? OOOOOOHHHHH!
Well, the more I read, the more I'm glad to see I actually managed to get a laugh out of someone!
"“His left arm looked like the giant claw of werewolf, but it had the skin and look of a demon's claw.”
So does it look like the claw of a werewolf or of a demon? o.0"
IT'S DEFINITELY BOTH. I suppose I meant the overall appearance looked much like a claw of a demon... but it looks like a giant claw of a werewolf? *nervous laugh*
Yeah, I don't know... but anyway!
"*The blast bursts into an explosion”
Well, I’m pretty sure a blast is an explosion?"
DEFINITELY NOT. THOSE ARE TWO DIFFERENT THINGS! Erm, I don't know. xD Poor choice of wording, for sure.
The end
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06-Aug-2013 14:32:34
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